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Well, I get its military fiction as the previous reviewer mentioned and I like it. I often bookmarked such novels but never got to read one because it didn't hook me, this one on the other hand starts easy and you don't have to read through tons of world building chapters from the start, it has nice and one of the kind humour so I will stick with the author to see what's next, not to mention it's his first work so im expecting he will grow at a great pace as an author.
i would give this novel a chance, still new as of this review. Though it has a lot potential to become one of my favorites. It has done some interesting things and will constitute to do so. if you are looking for something that is not a cliche, i suggest giving this a chance.
Author-san, I loved your previous novel, that's why Im willing to give this a try, but before I do, I have a question, will this stroy have NTR? I hope not. :(
Cette "Opéra" est a tombé par terre !(◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。
Le joli collégienne , avec ces joue toutes rouges comme des pommes rouge, pause une question :
« Si je veux faire une commande pour plus tard je dois m'adresser à qui ?»
( ꈍᴗꈍ)
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I don't know how this story has such a high rating, I have multiple books I read directly from authors websites where they publish their chapters themselves off any platform, I read several books from a couple random translators from writers who self publish on their own websites in japanese, and I read several books on here where apparently not a single writer has english as a first language, and this is by far the worst english I have ever seen, so many sentences don't make ANY sense, or have any meaning whatsoever because they are so butchered, I'm not willing to slog through when so many of the comments on reviews are talking about how terrible the grammar stays even past the 1000 chapter point, I sent a friend request on discord because I am a native English speaker, a writer myself, and willing to edit the story, because the base seems like it's an interesting story, I just can't tell for sure cause it's making my eyes bleed and giving me migraines trying to read it.
4.3/5
I dropped this book once after reading partway through the first chapter because it was cringe-y and dumb. I left a negative review and went on my way. However, I was PM’ed by someone to try again even though the first few chapters were rough.
Thank god I did.
This book is a hidden gem. The MC is wild and funny, and the supremacy games are a joy to read (especially the third one, SO HYPE - I couldn’t stop grinning!).
The grammar is a bit rough around the edges, but it is still perfectly fine to read. It’s commendable, even, because the author is Morrocan. I dont know the statistics over there on how many people know English, but I assume it’s not dominant.
This book just keeps getting better and better, I don't usually enjoy a lot of thrillers mostly because I get scared, but I'm so intrigued by the story that I can't drop it.
I only read the first 6 chapters there are several parts that repeat the same thing several times without getting to the point. It seem like explained were dragged out to make longer chapters. I don't think I can read further but the idea of this story is great. The story really needs an editor as well.
Good novel, but a Trash Translator. this is actually one of the best novels I've read on here this month and it would have defiantly gotten a 5 star review from me even if it didn't meet the 20 free chapter quota.
I think the main reason Myself and others Reviewed this so badly is the translator, This novel has great grammar but there are multiple repeat chapters after around chapter 12.
If the translator goes back and deletes the repeats and corrects the chapter name order I'll go and change my review to 5 stars.