I really like where this is going. assuming the author keeps it going. i will update this review if things change. but for now i like it!
I feel my brain rotting from reading this, I understand autht tries to make the start dramatic with the suicidal girl, but seriously it is a stupid reason and is as complex as ugly guy takes pics of girl so now time to die. If she is gonna end self anyway just kill guy with the pics I read till chap4
Great start and very interesting so far. Hoping for regular updates. Just don't stop writing the story. I am sure you will become professional author...
Hands down one of my favorite webnovels. Found it a week ago and got sucked into the story and world. I even was reading at work when I wasn't supposed to be haha. It interested me and then just sucked me in and held fast. The historical fiction aspect is brilliant, character depth is impressive and the world...oml so good. I wait everyday for the kotification that a chapter has been added and stop what I'm doing to read it haha
are there any new chapters or is the book finished
Well still fresh ,soo i will say ,whats next, you hace a vote and a chance to go big.I tought about the same thing before and i wanna ser Joe thats played información tour mind Good luck and gods speed.
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The logic behind this story is rather incoherent. The MC breaks through 5 stages of Qi cultivation in one day, then in another 3 days he breaks through 3 stages, then it takes him two months to breakthrough to the 9th stages of Qi cultivation? Like really? I know it's trying so much to make the MC the underdog but anyone who reads this and thinks it's okay should just go to the psych ward, something is probably wrong with their minds. Then there is the logic behind the sword cultivation as well, I mean it takes him one day to go from a clueless novice to achieving great sword intent, then he is expected to take one month to advance again? I mean the one about cultivation would have made more sense if he was practicing his swords techniques or alchemy but we are being given a load of mind reducing illogical chapters and we are supposed to make do with it? Web novel has really deteriorated in their choice of trial novels because this right here is a waste of time. Read at own risk.
Honestly, reading all the reviews I wasn't really expecting much.. But I was really surprised at how the translation does not really affect the story as much as I was led to believe. Most of them are basic and you can understand based on the words around it... Also Mc is very different compared to every other protagonist that I have read and is a genuine anti-hero.
Its fun, very entertaining and has a bit of slice of life genre. Its a good novel for passing out time relaxing and that though its kinda boring in some parts that i cant explain it lacks something that i cant express in words.
Very interesting plot and already has some good twists. Can't wait for the rest of it. Had me reading 3 in the morning. Translation isn't that bad just has a few errors that are easy to see and fix. I don't feel like their is much room for character development as the protagonist seems set in his ways, however their is still a lot that we can find out about the character. Cant wait to see how this story developed.
if i hoestly have to say anything, its the fact that the test to get into the military was waaaaaaaaaay to drawn out. i like the details, but i feel there are certain things that are focused on to much (ie, some of the notifications from the system are to unnecessarily focused on), especially with the word count per chapter. the chapters are quite short, and a lot of them go into explaining small details, rather than focusing on the main story. i know a lot of people enjoy slow paced novels, and there was a lot of information being divulged, but the entrance test for the military was from chapter 77 to 219 of (from what ive picked up) was only 15ish days long in the story. im not saying thats bad, certain people enjoy the focus on all the minute details, but frankly, it feels like there was a lot of filler, and repeated information. idrc about the characters traits, as those are bound to change with time, and i like to see the end result, but i feel like it would take to much time with that kind of pace. Im not meaning to dog or anything, im just saying theres a lot of filler and repeat information. and unless the pace of the story picks up, theres bound to be a lot of dissatisfaction arrising over time. i havent read past 219, and as i said, there was a lot of information to process, but the fact that its over 200 chapters, and we havent made it off the base planet, is a buzzkill for me so imma just drop it. i hope you still keep going with it, and wish you luck, but as much patience as id like to believe i have, thats way to slow paced for me.