Quite a good system story. Does what a system story should in showing clear progression, clear rules for progression, and of course most importantly, a satisfying payoff for getting that progression. Looking forward to how this develops later.
Overall a decent novel but nothing special and I would probably keep reading it if it updated
Total score - 4.6 The story premise and the hook are very nice, I have a feeling that it will be a very good story just with what is written so far. There are small problems with the writing such as words not being placed appropriately. But overall it is very good.
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Nice plot but pretty repetitive. A lot of information is repeated. Like a lot, as if the author was just trying to pad words. This pattern seems to repeat al the way to 629. Around chapter 630, the plot changes. Let's talk about how different the plot is. At the end of 629, Kant says they will march to attack the undead in three days. At the start of 630, the undead have apparently been handled. Bunduk is the only remaining hero left from all the heroes he had previously and has seemingly lost his special powers and become an ordinary person.New characters and terms have appeared in place of the other heroes and the Mount and Blade terms. His subordinates seem to have become normal people and not just blindly loyal soldiers. The previous plot with the world nobles seems to have never happened and it basically forgets the whole system that the story is based on. The new plot is based on things that never happened in the original story.I looked for the mtl and the translation definitely follows the mtl. I really have no idea what happened. Maybe Mount and Blade finally caught on to what was happening and stopped the author from using those terms. The novel also ends in like 200 chapters, so idk how the author intends on ending a new story that started 3/4's through the story
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Main character is the epitome of reused reincarnation plot. Reveals so many of his cards early on when he has no power and no cultivation. Attracts people who want his knowledge. Probably will fight against them. Repeat.Also introduces him as some almighty expert that “accidentally died” without any explanation.... no enemy? Just oops... I tripped over a rock and died as one of the top 10 cultivators.
Ive found a chinese novel where mc is born as a turtle…1 in a world where spirit energy is coming back..Another in a cultivation world.. where the mc is a turtle but has splits (clones of different animals) i think it had like 1k some thing chapters.
interesting novel to read......pretty good and nice...??????????????????????????????????????????
This story will have action at some point, form the description and reading here, construction could be improved. feel like he will meet lot more people and overall tone is light. more update