A very realistic story indeed, detailed and can summarise the experience of manyGrab a box of tissues and strap on to enjoy this story with your tears
I was really immersed in your story author the mystery really got me thinking.There are only a few mistakes I would like to address is about the setting since there isn't much description about the area and I'm still confused about what the characters look like. However you story is amazing keep it up
This is my first novel, I know very well that it is full of errors, but I hope everyone will criticize what he sees as incorrect so that I can improve myself.I hope someone who reads in silence will make me hear his voice tooEnglish is not my first language, so forgive me for the mistakes. Thank you to those who supported me, especially my mother and sisters. Without them, I would not have dared to write.
great book, bad grammar, but i understand and im starting to get hooked so is it possible to know when the update will be?currently looking for a good novel genre like this one and life merchant, if anyone knows any please let me know haha
Good novel, I like the topic that you have with this and hope you post more chapters to this, because it can go big and be a big hit! ❤️?❤️?❤️❤️❤️?❤️❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?
An Interesting premise. I'd like to see where this goes. What will happen if only you had access to Evolution? Let's see how it goes. Looking foward.
I've read all the free chapters. The MC is a moron. He whines, complains, and does and says things that made me wish I could reach through my screen and slap him for being a moron. The first 10-15 chapters are hard to read because the MC is a moron. The story does get better as the tory progresses, but after 52 chapters I can count the number of times the MC did or said something I thought was moronic with one hand. If you have any doubt about this review read the book, then read the comments left by other readers.
Right, there's several things I don't like about this novel, but all of them revolve around how everyone is keeping the protagonist in the dark about everything. Want to know some of the details of the situation you're about to risk your life over? Have some "cryptic advice" and "mysterious smiles" instead.And despite all this, the protagonist is really active. Like, sure, I've only been in this world for a day, and I learned my only combat skills within a couple hours, but sure, I'll join you in fighting all these soldiers, despite explicitly being a support character.And the romance is a hot mess.- Hello, MC-kun, would you like to become my fiancee?- Sure, pretty girl who I know almost nothing about. I would love to.
Misleading title and genre tags, below average product.The writing quality is average at best - readable but with lots of mistakes.Updates are slow. Story is average at best, but too much Asian cliches of family love and care, too much of mutual respect and bond between high and low status people on the base of ... nothing. Main Character being overpowered is a common trope, but there should be a reason for it - even if a bad one, here is none.Characters are there, but feeling like cardboard target in a shooting range, it's not big deal if they were missing.The world is average compared to other novels, but lack building and explanation - basically - if you have read other MMOrpg novels, you should know it, which is a bad move in my opinion.Won't recommend, unless really bored or just wish to support the author.
A Counterfeit Glory.'Gate of Revelation' has a good concept, and it is implemented rather well, specially how the characters are connected to each other.However, like many Chinese novels, this one, too, suffers from what I call the 'Counterfeit Glory', which means exaggerating and glorifying everything Chinese, and rejecting and shaming other cultures and traditions.I have never, until now, written a review to diss a novel, this is the first time. The trigger was in Chapter 637, where a character, named Yang Lin says to a Swiss woman that she doesn't know integrity as her country proclaimed to stay neutral while secretly helping the nazis.So the question that arises is, is China a righteous country ?We won't go into details and create a debate whether China is a good or bad country - it has no end to it.No country is righteous, that is one we must accept. It feels so sad to see such biased views in a novel you like reading.Writers like Dancing, and that of novels like "I'm really a superstar" need to learn from Er Mu, the writer of 'Release That Witch'.RTW has a mature protagonist, who does not spend his time dissing others, nor is he a loser who acts arrogantly because of some system. and he surely does not show himself off like a superstar after stealing other people's works. RTW also acknowledges and respects homosexuals. Where other authors create vicious jokes on them, Er Mu surprisingly shows us the touching romance and love between two females, Princess Tilly and Ashes. This shows the difference between these authors.There are two things that I find are present in poor quality novels, like this one - 1) Arrogance 2) Irresponsible and cowardice.1) A protagonist needs to be strong and still humble. If he is not a good person, and cannot be used as a reference for self improvement, why the hell must we read that novel ? Although Chen Xiaolian acts as a good person, there are many instances where we see his overly arrogant side which is usually unnecessary. The various scenes of discrimination are enough to provide proof.2) A protagonist is a leader and a winner. There is no use and no reason for us to read a story about a loser- after all, there are many losers while there is only one winner. So it is very irritating to see a protagonist which has strength to act cowardly and selfishly. There is no need for me to write much, a comparison between 'Roland Wimbledon' from Release that Witch and Chen Xiaolian from Gate of Revelation is enough to tell that.In short, it is a pity to lose such excellent works just because of their author's biased thoughts.
*More* beast taming? -_-
This is a good take on a dark/ghost/spirit dungeon novel. I like it because it takes a nice take on necromancy as well the core is kind to everyone.