DarjaRenenBBz
romance?
starting today. apparently this is good sh*t
Translator dropped bcs noone commissioned him ¯\\_༼ ಥ ‿ ಥ ༽_/¯
I'm not a fan of a death mage inventing mayonnaise and teaching people how to cook fish
Wish also this could be general tech not just video games only
The hell? Lambert still did not cross the line? 4 times he attempted to kill you! First was successful, second the seduction trap if not for you, third hunting trip, fourth the mines, tell me how much more would it take to cross the line? Fck this…
790 netori sex
He also barely knows the clan at the time.
I'm hooked, looking forward to more chapters
combines action, romance, and intriguing twists, keeping readers glued to this novel...combines romance, action, and intriguing twists, keeping readers glued to this novel...
Writing this review coz of author's request in the latest chapter. Well, up until this chapter, I can say with certainity that the novel is developing nicely. I look forward to it every day. Fortuantely, it has nice updating schedules with two or more chapters everyday.
Writing Quality: The author describes the scenes vividly. His/her vocabulary is vast, I spotted little to no redundant words.
Story Development: It was all good. But the opening is quite cliche, I often read on those old generation novels. Tho, it wasn't a bad thing. The author almost perfectly done what's needs to be done on the first 3 chaps. Like, reader's substitution to the MC. Letting us know the circumstances, the world building, and so on.
Character Design: The MC is Multidimensional. His character was done well. As for the side characters, it's easy to imagine how they are like. The way the author describes their traits is commendable.
Updating Stability: Not bad
World Background: It was interesting! Especially his new family and the hints.
Overall: From the scale 1-10, this book scored 8. It's not bad!
