this novel is good but after you read like 250 plus chapters it gets a little boring like it's relative ? like till ch 250 all the enemy's who have fought mc where so weak compared to the MC that it was a joke plus they all have the same reaction to his power like oh i can't Believe my eyes or no that was a fluke it happened to many times
How tf was this picked HOW
bear? then butterfly? will the third one be a ginseng or something? even the title sounds alike I didn't read a single chap at this point only the synopsis, I gave it 5 stars since it's another beast taming novel hehe
I recommend nobody read this novel. Mc makes highly questionable and stupid moments in a matter of couple chapters turning it from a promising novel to trash. It all started with mc going to test his talent.
The granmer is above the average in webnovel.The updates are consistent.You charecter needs a lot of work. The charecter acts like a 13 Year old boy. who’s second chance at life did’t tought him anything. The charecter made referances of Mc systems but doesn’t understand why his system has a quirky personality.World building is big part of the story, so, far the setting of your story remains vague. Please go more in detail to understan The circumstances your charecter is under base on the locations he is. and please read a business book. Your charecter setting is a business, your buSiness Sense sucks, honestly.
First off, I absolutely love your book cover it's really cool. I like your plot and it's concept. The character build-up is also very good. You're doing a good job, keep it up.
So I actually finished all 51 chapters. It actually was pretty good in terms of mannerisms and writing quality from what I've read so far, but my main gripes are with some plot points. Characters are memorable, interactions were great, and the style of being set in Xuanxia setting was near perfect. Here are the problems I found when reading.1. Firstly, the mc commits suicide right on wedding day when he clearly enjoyed the girl's appearance and mannerisms. I found this rather ridiculous because after his soul returns to his body, he literally warms up to her simply because she didn't view him as a boy toy. The reasons as to why miss Yun even has such strong feelings for him, other than his looks, was never explained. I just found this plot point to be much too ridiculous. His relationship with servant girl made sense and is plausible, but he could literally know his wife more during the marriage rather than just suicide. I found it to be rather rash and stupid when the main character is clearly an intelligent genius.2. The white deer arc started and ended just as quick before we see the MC into a new area. I personally didn't like having his soul jump around so much before one plot point is finished, because it seems really messy and doesn't connect too well. Perhaps the story is still too early to know the reasonings for this, but after introducing a memorable character with likeable motives and personality, then sudden hopping to a different setting, felt really turning off for me.3. I don't think the character's powers were explained too well in terms of execution. So far, I know he has some sort of "soul power?" that allows him to face off against cultivators, but aside from that there's nothing else that's talked about more. MC seems to rely on this more than thinking of other ways to fight, and I suppose there's no other choice presently because he can't cultivate, but I think the polishing needs to be made so it's easier to diffrentiate what powers does the MC have. Tldr, It's well written and I'm glad most cliches were avoided. However, there's still things that require better execution in terms of plot. The setting, characters, and interactions are strong, but in terms of plot there's stuff that seems awkward to read at the moment. Also recommend changing your title since your MC truly did "die" and came back to life, because this story doesn't fit with a "Dark Age" theme.
Pretty good. Question: How powerful do you intend to make him?.................................................................................................................................................
Good writing and thank you for giving some insights.I really hope you keep updating ?
Please maintain the pace well, and don't rush to add more women in short time. It's kinda annoying if you add too many women in short time.
A Gem is all i can say. Everything is Perfect EXCEPT the rare use of System!!Author-san, please try to increase more instances where host can purchase many things from System. The title itself has System?
Title: 我在异界有座城Author: 寒慕白Status: 4600+ chapters and ongoingYes, if you read where it says 4600 chapters and ongoing, that's not a typo. It seems to have 4387 chapters, and then starts a new volume with a new numbering system that's at 273 chapters as of typing this.I don't think I've ever seen this on Qidian or other sites leaderboards so I have to wonder about the quality...but at the same time a solid fanbase must like it, or the author wouldn't keep going.