While the grammar makes it hard to read, this book has a lot of potential .
what a road to go all the way to the end, had to go to WW to finish it 2088 chapters, a long way it was and worth it. it's not the best novel u can find but it was made with a lot of passion and feelings in it, i felt sad, angry, happy, sorrowful together as it passed, what a great story.
Not so bad would rate negative 5 stars if I could, since reading this novel was a waste of time. The MC does not live up to his glorious status and character. Instead, he acts like a noob high-schooler who gets pushed around by women all the time. I suppose this might be targeted at female readers with low self esteem or something? I find the plot is unrealistic. Shame on noodletown on picking such a low quality novel. Boooooooo ?
the author sucks at describing the fights... it's even at the level where it's frustrating to read...in addition there are too many useless descriptions which already make the fight not so well described more difficult to read, and besides the author stops redefining the description of the technique as well as the weapons each time one of your characters makes a attack, and above all we already know that water represses fire, no need to give such a detailed and boring description in each paragraph...for me it's the worst novel I've seen in terms of combat description! just too frustrating!
Extremely boring. It's basically a rehash of coiling dragon. What's with all the zero chapter read five star reviews dominating the front page...My biggest problems with the story are pacing, followed by poor world building and one dimensional characters.Mentioning a city with tens of millions of people, how many thousands of cities, provinces, worlds and star systems there are do not equat to world building. You have to show that the world around you matters. Did your mc lost his flying bison in a city and it's so vast you can't find it? If not, than it doesn't matter how many hundreds of millions of people are in the city, they are but numbers and irrelevant and GOD, is the entire world in this story so irrelevant! It seems like nothing is happening in the world unless the mc is interacting with it. There are no sense of realism there. Mc lives in a castle, goes to some other castle, kills someone as a mission, comes back, mopes around in his castle because that's how you run a city, and voila he's the strongest in the world and goes to some place and...God the story lacks pacing and so many poorly done time skips. Show that passing of time matters before you do a time skip, not just when you need a powerup and can't find a way to engage your readers. ISSTH did a hundred year skip and I wasn't mad because before that I was with the mc on his day to day adventure, learning how important a day can be. And god the time skips in this story are so lame. He basically goes from zero to hevean rank in a few dozon chapters and heaven to legend in a couple more and by a hundred he achieves transcendence, the level that author introduced to be strongest at the start of the story. How do you keep writing once you've done that? Why, do a dbz twist, introduce a few more levels.And do you know how many interesting things happen to his life in the time he gets op as fk? You can count them on one finger, that's four if you are lazy, and god this story is so lazily written!You know, you can still feed on a lazily written, poorly paced story in a vacuum world, if the characters and their banters make up for it, and believe it or not, author fks that up really spectacularly. The characters have no depth, no complexity, no autonomy, no agency. They just exist to fill up a space. The two loving parents that got in trouble to motivate the mc, the cute lil bro to motivate the mc, the backstabbing gal to motivate the mc and hype the mysogonist fan base, none of them serves any other purpose and once you realise how utterly robotic and dull the characters are, how do you connect with them in any way? At least make up for their lack of personality with quips or humor but no, it's a serious story. A seriously dull story.And fk this Alice trope. When you have less personality than a side character with no dialogue, you don't get the girl, deal with with.
In my humble opinion, this novel is a very poorly written shonen. For the shonen part, its the nakamas, the love, the loyal good attitude, on a neverending journey with petty enemies.Now for the poorly written part, the list is quite long.Of all the xianxia/xuahuan novels I have read, I have never seen as-many brain-dead characters as in here.Enemies ALL have the same mentality, petty af, short-sighted, if they find out the MC is stronger, they will either run and lie to get stronger guys to come, or they will still attack the MC and die. NO EXCEPTIONS.MC kills almost everyone, and it's not even enjoyable or remotely suspenseful.Another infuriating thing is the bystanders. They are all incredibly stupid as well. Whether they can"t see the level of the fighters, or can suddenly magically see it. They will ALWAYS be wrong. Not even once will you see a bystander state that some guy will win and be right. This absolutely RUINS the narration.You can also add the insufferable summaries every few chapters. the author seems to have a lot of trouble filling the word quotas for his chapters, so he will resume either the whole arc or the whole novel. After a few hundred chapters, this takes 3/4 paragraphs with the same content.This novel is also poor story-wise. There are a few themes that cycle again and again. After a hundred chapters you will have read all the novel's plot. Like a neverending cycle, you'll read about a berated MC, killing organizations, fighting for his life and eventually winning. Tournaments, Rankings, Super strong guys that should one-shot the MC losing. Weak guys seeing that but still going after MC, cycling through the whole killing organizations, tournament, rankings. and again, and again, and again. 3 reasons to kill the MC, he's obviously weak, his GF is too pretty, revenge. The story is full of flags. Depending on the introduction "x doted on by y
Website : qidian chinaViews : 9.16millionRating : 8.7(24)Chapters : 2446Status : ongoingWord count : 5.03millionauthor level : lv5 No of works : 1Comments : 870Year started : 2015
i dont really get where this is going. the mc is already the richest guy in the world, he has a wife, and he seems setteled in life. where is this going? I dont know, but based on what i do know of the chapters so far(20) and the genre, i really cant imagine it going anywhere exiting. also, i find the whole plot way to far fetched, its just to improbable to follow. it seems boring and lame.
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only problem are the English names they bring down the quality and disturb the flow of the storyWhy would you think that after reading Chinese novels for years we would now like English names
I liked it a lot has a great story that I wish I was a part of. If only my phone worked like that. May this have a lot more chapters and cars
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