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The concept of a world where one's worth is determined by godlike entities called Archons is an intriguing premise for a novel. Raith's story of being chosen by the Archon of failure and death, and his journey towards becoming a hero, adds an element of excitement and adventure to the plot. The idea that death is not the end for Raith, and that his first death changes everything, creates a sense of mystery and anticipation for readers. Overall, this section of the novel sets the stage for an exciting story with unique world-building and an interesting protagonist. [I am looking forward to reading more and discovering where Raith's journey takes him next.]
A Bunker is a limited scenario. If the MC gets the resources for free then the scenario is useless. Furthermore, iron needs additives to turn steel, basically carbon, which is not impossible to obtain but is useless. In a Bunker scenario separating water from waste would be more useful than even steel.
Can I give 0 stars? First they did my boy han xiao wrong in the manga and now this? What has the world come to for an copy of the legendary mechanic to appear.
can barley understand the first chapter what even is with the random letters that honestly make no sense??? the story and characters seem good but it is hard to tell because of the slightly poor writing quality. other than that as far as I can tell it is pretty good. keep writing and maybe do some very slight revisions and it would be a great work.
great book. this is really hidden gem.brother and sister please try to read this and vote so this novel can continue.i never put a review for trial read before. but this one , i feel the need to put a review. the story so good.it feel like years ago when i read the 1st translated webnovel (LMS and coiling dragon)now i feel like really reading a good webnovel again.
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I was reading it and noticed that he used words to tell a story. just wow, didn't know that could be done. props to the author for this amazing discovery and use of the English language.
Very good novel, nothing really stood out as amazing, but the reason I liked it so much was because nothing stood out as being bad either (this is pretty rare, usually I find many things to criticize in a novel lol). The highlights of the novel are more subtle, doing the little things well so the novel flows smoothly. The best I've read so far in the "picking up attributes, xp, etc" genre. Mc is pretty op and does a good job of using his cheat and trying to stay out of trouble. I like his sinister style of doing things, using dirty tricks to win without caring about his image. The side characters are good and there isn't much cliche stuff. The world is pretty dark and the character interactions seem more realistic to me compared to most novels on here. I read up to ch276 before writing this.