GTOKA
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Author here, it's hard to make an exemption on my mistakes here so I'm criticized my book too. I rather want to be truthful to myself that trying to lie. By the way thanks to those who still look at this book, promise it'll be good of you still wait.
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The plot is really fascinating and the characters are unusual and interesting. The grammar and writing can be improved, but the overall setting, tone and storyline is engaging and impressive. Good job!
Haven’t started reading yet but looks really good and I have heard great things about it and am really excited to start it. So far loving this app because of great writers like yourself
what a shame a great novel ... yet no one is willing to translate it .JUTS DO IT JUST DO IT JUST DO ITJUTS DO IT JUST DO IT JUST DO ITJUTS DO IT JUST DO IT JUST DO ITJUTS DO IT JUST DO IT JUST DO IT
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This shits been here for 4months but the really good novels disappear after 1.Im extremely saltyI demand equalityAnd I demand quality novels
This story is very intriguing, i love stories with systems, and this one is off to a great start, I like the concept and the mc, I can see the effort placed into the story, it is well written and deserves its five stars. Keep up the good work
Currently just entering the 100's and I have to say it's been a good read, this kind of book is right up my alley in terms of how it's made and such. I personally really enjoy the soul system, it gives a bit of spice and random to the mix, which I again, really enjoy. I also saw some complaints on the combat and stuff from fellow reviews, and can say that to me the length felt fine, I like the added and bonus details, not saying they don't have a point though, but to me it felt fine. And also, I do personally like the characters, and while yes, to some it may feel like their just there to be there and such, to me they feel human, and that I love. So overall it's great in my book, and one I look forward to reading. It also feels like your taking reviewers advice into consideration author when it's helpful, which I say thank you to, as not many authors do so. But overall, it's been a great read so far and I look forwards to more.
This novel really isn't too bad. More specifically, the source material doesn't seem too bad. The problem with this novel is that the translation is below MTL level, it's incoherent and I'm insulted that Webnovel actually allowed this to be released. Nowadays trashy novels get decent translations while the somewhat better ones get abysmal ones. I can't in good faith give this a good score due to the translation quality. 0/5.
One chapter so far and im actually quite excited for the next chapterthe wording is cringy at times but is comical as wellshows promise @ 1 chap
