I'm enjoying it, if you don't like harem or lemon I recommend going back to read NTR works hihi...........................,.......,.............................................................
Evaluation: Below AverageWQ: Several gramm errors which doesn't greatly affect the story itself. Several repeated dialogue & redundant thought process. 3/5SD: With a slow to average pace development which greatly affects the story & MC progression that resulted in several plot holes. 3/5CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are severely lacking. His powers are OP (High regen/intelect & technopathy) but was nerfed as per your portrayal which is contradictory. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for marvel-verse. 2/5US: Chapters are short, stability of update isn't up to speed & tons of redundancy. 3/5WB: it's already at Chapter39 however it is still in it's beginning phase & it lacks exploration which is a let down as marvel-verse is very broad. 3/5Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
overall I love this story I just would love to get more chapters. if you were to update regularly I would be almost addicted to your story and I want to read as much as possible. please speed up your reading we know something big is coming later on please don't take a year to get started again. you definitely have one of the best stories on web novel so far and I have read about 100 already
Overall unsatisfactory in both personality and writing style I wish there was more of a good description than a horrible first impression. I hope the writer will continue to work on these issues and the story has me turning more pages
First of all i will say this novel is good and its have a refreshing vibes its not like the other novel that the mc is just want to establish a company or want to become a actor just to have a sex in any beautiful female that theyve seen.. so for me i will rate this novel 5 star.. its good and have potential also its has many words..
Please release this novel fast..... If possible put it on priority..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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This whole novel is trash I don't care if u delete my comment because u author know full well I am right I don't even know how this made it in the top 100
Short but satisfying novel. It was like a breath of fresh air, I really loved it.The ending brought tears to my eyes - in a good way. I would suggest everyone to try it out. If you are looking for something enjoyable to read that is not too long, then give this one a go!
This is Sick. Great Novel keep up the work author!..........................................................................................................................
I really like this novel and after reading five of the seven chapters that are available at the moment I can see where there could be some improvement the writing quality is............... satisfactory. The stability of updating oh dear God I looked at the amount of chapters there were on the side tab and six of the chapters were updated seven months ago well the seventh chapter was 10 days ago(*•*) this is bad. Everything else though is pretty goodufffcufffc. (Word count 473)