I wanna smack the MC's head soo much like mannnnn it was frustrating but yeah he has a realistic character growth pacing somewhat slow at times but this one is i guess "a diamond in the rough"
This is the most beautiful literature.
I tagged this book to you all
Nostalgic experience and ancient history fabulous. Read it and enjoy your quarantine
Not a bad story at all. great development and a good pace. Its still in the beginning stages but that's fine. There is a lot of potential to the story.
I really like the story and the pace of the world building, it also has nice and not too many interactions with characters, also I noticed that the mc isn't dumb like other authors would do with their mc.
Good story, Dark and interesting to read. The character's design is amazing. MC is by far the best but still has a lot of potential. The writing was great. World background is also great. Overall this is worth the read.
The story itself is extremely interesting, while the writing quality is at a perfect level for such a novel. The plot is enjoyable, and the characters' emotions are drawn out well. It's really a great novel! Keep up the good work, author!
Honestly it suck, I've read 60ish raw chapter and can just say that author/MC is forcing too much on losing money that it downgrade all the good quality of it's story. I'm not against MC fully using it's system but I think the fact that he needs to "lose" money on his gf so that he can get x100 back is annoying. He doesn't seems to care much about her tbh, he "use" her as cash cow and she fell in love with his "kindness" as for him it's a pretty good deal 'cause she's beautiful, skillful, obedient and many more, anyway I don't rly feel any love from MC or it's not very well pronounced. Later he's just trying to make money (losing) and for that he needs to invest on his GF but her GF is so kind that she try to minimize the lose but he still try even though he gain money by doing business by investing on her. I'm honestly fed up by his greed or what's over. In the end it's a game of who can lose or minimize (and have profit) money. Anyway idea's all right, not very original but still could have been interesting but ended up bad with it's setting like it's system rebate or MC personality.
Bro it haven’t even start yet and I haven’t even read chapter 1 mc is he to she?
Very good, very well crafted world, a very interesting read, actually a breath of fresh air if you look at how repetitive novels nowadays are, I hope the work becomes famous
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All in all I enjoyed the read. Still catching up with most recent chapters but from what I see this series has a lot of potential. I’m particularly interested in the world building!
A more “savoury” version of my review at 80 chapters: This is a peak-tier gem.Writing Quality: Pleasant- Very few grammar mistakes and a good level of dialogue-text. System text presented clearly. 5 starsUpdating stability: 1ch/day- Great in my books. One of my only gripes with this novel though is the short chapters… some conversations spill into the next chapter which can break immersion. The release frequency balances that out so not detrimental. 4 starsStory development: There’s an established overarching goal and arc goal. It works towards meeting the arc goal with great storytelling and interesting developments and schemes in the background. Probably the best point about the novel. Lemons do not detract from the experience- in some scenes it’s described, whereas others are just post-coital conversations, something I’m grateful for! No dragging of lemons across several chapters + the novel isn’t all about seducing females to get to the top, though that is a part of the MC’s success. 5 starsCharacters: The MC is perfect! Rational, practical, good at ?, and most of all possessive. Definitely No NTR in this novel. Other characters have been portrayed well: Bodyguard recruits are as naive as recruits, City lords are as scheming as they should be, and potential harem members are buttered up well (developments are quick but not dissatisfyingly so). 5 starsWorld Background: An easy to understand power system which is definitely appreciated! Info is disseminated in dialogues naturally and through non-chunky paragraphs. Hope there’ll be some expansion on the blackthorn kingdom and demon fronts, maybe some political manoeuvring etc in the future. 4.5 starsThe MC is an ambitious man who will scheme and subjugate [women] his way to the top. If you like this premise, then you’ll enjoy the novel for sure.