The idea is good, but even the first few chapters the word count stretching is really dramatic . I wish someone would write a better version of this.
Nice title and great book cover. The story is not one that grabs attention immediately but rather, it needs patience and a few more chapters to understand and truly fall in love with the character and that was epic! Nice storyline.
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One of the best cultivation novels I've ever read, at least top 5 of all time for sure. The characters are extremely well written. The Mc can be seen as the "rich young master" of the novel, but an extremely smart and charismatic one.The novel is well aware of the tropes inside it's genre, and plays really well within them. Every character has a personality of its own, and makes their own decisions based on their personality.Let's not even talk about the world building and cultivation realms, everything is well explained and has a reason, not just the same a to b increases qi by a billion fold. While reviewing this, I come to realize that this is probably top 3 of all time.
Good start and story. If author just cuts the sentences into several pieces and sometimes use comma, it will be great. I’m just assuming it hasn’t gone popular yet because it hadn’t been published for long and the author hasn’t gained enough exposure.
I mainly read this on r/HFY. It's one of my favorite stories, it even managed to sucker me into reading a genre I normally don't (and liking it to boot!). The world building is good, and doesn't stray away from darker topics like slavery. The characters grow naturally and the relationships between characters seem dynamic and natural. All in all it's a great story, and we shall watch this story's career with great interest.
A unique book i see. A different twist and style to the cultivation world. Solid MC, Solid power system, great plots. Just a little editing and i see a top book in the making. Good one author. ??
First of all Full support from us and second Don't end this journey of yours Mr Author It's really good to see dedicated people like you and also RI fan ????
This story is absolutely phenomenal. Everything is fantastic I don’t even know how to describe it. The MC may be OP but it is still not boring whatsoever. Unfortunately, author stopped writing it. Author if you’re reading this set up a patreon or something. I’m sure the other readers would rather pay you $10 a month for a chapter a day as long as you keep writing. It’s also better than letting webnove scam us.
The great setting I read up to the latest chapter and the grammar was good and the synopsis elaborates on what is to be expected on theis story. Overall great story❤
read the title and then read the netorare tag, like how can these two things be true at the same time i don' t really understand, this author is a literal example of a cuckold. unless u are an aspiring cuck yourself dont bother reading this shit
A well writen story so far. Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!