Thanks for recommending this site. I thought that translation group dropped this novel. Was getting machine translated, sh*t translation everywhere. And I really wanted to read the ending (read till ch 375 six months ago).
its missing a few chapters at the end (5 i think)
Heavenly Scribe's Summary for Dummies
(COMPLETED)
Pros:
1. MC has a system where he gets powerful from the rewards as long as he stays a SHUT IN! (GO TOUCH SOME GRASS!)
2. Hilarious Comedy between MC, his relatives, disciples, subordinates, and enemies
3. MC doesnt gets defeated
4. Cultivating Disciples! (Come this grand daddy has all top tier cultivation resources)
5. Easy and Simple Plot which does not complicate things. Casual Read (Unlike Top Tier Cultivation)
6. Short 800+ chapters
Cons:
1. No Romance (NO SIMPS ALLOWED)
2. Not much serious drama or action
3. Comedy Scenes appears less at the later half of the plot (But it still exist from time to time)
4. MC spends most of the time at home controlling things from behind the scenes (The true POWER in the Shadows)
Why?
is it still going?
Bro what happened?? mc turned into a pedo
Good story, the plot is interesting and the characters are well developed. Still, I want to give you a few tips from a fellow author that can imho improve your writing...
Try to drop the "he said," and "she said" in every dialogue line it's kind of distracting. Another thing is you should focus less on every mundane thing that Max does - remember you are writing a novel, not a journal. So focus primarily on things important for the plotline. But overall I think it has potential so keep writing!
W - wooow give this guy all your powerstones pleaseA - A good book, a good read, a 5 starsR - really good bro you did very well L - I love itttO - Osmosis (????)R - Really good cover too, the font is noiceD - don't stop publishing chapters, give me moreeee
I've only read a few chapters so these are my initial thoughts. The power scaling is quite lame, at low levels, warriors should be able to kill mages, much less high-level fighters to magical beasts. They both use mana so why are the mages so over-glorified, if being a warrior is that weak compared to mages, why would anyone consider being one? The writing style and story so far are good though, I don't find it hard to keep engaged and can imagine the scene being told adequately.
I like the story would love to see more even the raw if it doesn't get picked. This one seem a little more organized and not rushed compared to a few of a similar genre the author should write more and continue with the current pace the story seems to have.
This sounds really interesting .out of them all,I’m hoping this one gets picked..:
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