Nonsensical nonsense and unreadable. I don't even know at this point.
good fun, long quality chapters with the down side of slower uploads, with chapters being 2-3x longer than other novels the word count is probably similar to others.recommended.
Read what was free for a reference point(to few chapters to be charging in my opinion but do things your way). Grammar needs a lot of work. Some sentences left me lost at what was happening. Also study up on when and where to use commas. The world building is ok but it’s lacking in detials. What world is he on, where is his home world, what is the geography of the city and area he is in? The systems also doesn’t seem to be the same across the board. Lvl doesnt mean much if the class is weak. Also didn’t talk about monsters and their systems or growth patterns. You also wrote about realms but not in any detail so we can have an idea what it means. Getting strong from eating what you kill is used a lot lately and there is no real unique attention grabber for me. Update stability is also not where I would hope for a story that is charging. Hope you can rework the story and edit it. Good luck
3000 chapter in, and I'm still hooked. Once he leaves the small world, the stories get so much better pacing.
gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
I will say, I don't think this Fanfic deserves 5 stars for the update, but it's so good that I'm going to leave it like that, but all the other 5 stars it certainly deserves
Pretty interesting so far.
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
Oi oi go update your other book “Only boy in family full of women”…….ya left us hanging.
well..... I'm a degenerate, your book got me hooked, keep it up man
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
Honestly, it gave me a feel of Kuroku no basketball, with a tint of reincarnation into the past. It's filled with a theme of determination and persistence which is a rare find. Although i don't read sports novels this is a good read.