Dear Author, you had an intriguing concept for the story! The plot is interesting. I like the interactions between Matt and Ashton. I wonder who is a kid and who is an adult there...Well done!
Nice characters. The character background is attention-grabbing. So far, the story is well written, easy to understand, and really gets you involved.Keep up the good work.
From the few chapters, there are I can say this novel has a solid premise which has made the interactions between the mc and others very interesting. The only thing I have a gripe about is that his views are different from those around him with no explanation. This doesn't matter too much and it could be explored later. I'm excited to see where this goes.
I wanna smack the MC's head soo much like mannnnn it was frustrating but yeah he has a realistic character growth pacing somewhat slow at times but this one is i guess "a diamond in the rough"
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This is a good read for cultivation fans, but for those who hate wuxia it's not recommended to read it, because it's useless to change the protagonist but the mc's behavior is still like China
Might be the best out of the recent batch. Honestly this batch of choice reads are bad this time. REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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This is such a fun story! It's even better later than in first chapters ,where this is was mostly cheesy slive of life/romance story. Now there is action, intrigue and tons of characters! Im exctied to see what there will be in the future!I just hope weekly updates will come back, as promised. Keeping up pace with updates is hard, but i believe in you! :D
I hate it when people mess up English because it's so annoying, but the author steadily keeps improving, and the story is absolutely amazing. Keep up the good work!
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I've read many story similar to this genre but this is what i want to my library because this is a very constructive and entertaining one. The humor and the scenes are what you expect to a realistic fiction.