Love the way this story unfolds.. Seems like there is s new plot coming up after knowing Mr.Alexander was involved. Who is the person behind all these? A new one or one of the people we had read before...
this is great novel,the author change pov once in a while makes character alive whic is very rare nowadays thats makes this character design is great 5 for it, with good character design and good writing style make the story quiet rich, story from the past, politic, fight, love, friendship, story development is quiet complex the author jump the story one to another character and time, which is we can see the plot will be connected later, 5 for story developmentupdatinh stabilitiy? lets skip this just give this 5i still confused with the world background, there is no clear explanation what kind of world is this or perhaps i missed it or didnt read it yet, what i know this is because its in the plot, the author explain it lil by little, makes reader curious , feel the emotion is sign of good novelmany review didint like it because "wife cheating" ntr, but thats not enough reason to give this novel bad review and hate the author, its ridiculouswell i give it overall 5, last read chap 105,i just feel some lacking emotional delivery thing, perhaps i will read some surprise later. if there is map it will be great too, this is good novel the author know his way he just need to sharpen the skill and am sure the next novel will be greatkeep up the good work
I don't know about other but feel kind of worthless as i have already read another book by author by name of blind box of real state: i got a divine hint system and the similarity is more than 80%. feel kind of worthless if you have already read one of them.
The characters. Ah yes, the characters. It frustrates me to no end that we have such a dumb MC. Every. Single, Fucking. Time. He always chooses the worse option. Always does something unnecessary. Always. That’s why I’m dropping this novel. Though the writing itself is good.
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Whoah! Excellent grammar! what a good way to start reading ???. Very interesting and the more you read, the more you get hooked. Keep up the good work, Sir.
Awesome story.(the rest is just because of the comments should not be less than 140 characters bs)(crap, still not enough)(fffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu**)(phew done)
The concept is good, I like it, the thing is I had Hoped it was Cultivation, but it turned out to be MartialArts, im a bit disappointed, but once again imma say it, the novel is good.
The idea of side effect is good but the translator or the author did a really bad job, it's all over the place and hard to understand also the mc is sexualy attracted by a little girl ........
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I like the feel of it, it can become some nice story but one ****** clique can ruin this, since it seems you have taken heavy inspiration from japanese novels beware of being your avarage weeb s h i t. (myclasshasbeentransportedigotnothingimopananyway)The first chapter leaves good impression but for the love of god please simplify your status. I know you are trying to make a good game as well as a good story but enough is enough have a good time writing. [Its your novel thanks for reading this.]
Love this author... Pls make some more updates for me to read.... Its so tiring when it comes to waiting so im hoping that you will add the chapters on this as many as you can ... I promise to provibe power stone a day for this amazing novel... Tnx