Great story , Great plot, I'm really enjoying the battles of Kellvin.??
It's totally different from what we see every day, especially at the beginning, the character himself is interesting, the plot is captivating….I wish the author could develop our young hero enough.
It deserves 5 stars, quality Is very high and also feels fresh
this is peak writing and intense action and keep writing
absolutely amazing ? I love your work .
i will have the most comments on a book soon
such a good start for a NEWBIE author?good luck!
Your way of explaining all the caliber and scenarios are amazing. The character seems to be overpowered, if you could fix that then it's great
If you have nothing to do, this is a good way to kill time if you are bored.
This light novel effectively piques the reader's interest. I would be grateful if the author could share the planned length of the novel and the inspiration behind its creation. The writing is quite impressive, particularly considering English may not be the author's first language. While there is room for improvement in certain areas, I am confident that Amaraz possesses the potential to achieve a storytelling quality comparable to "Shadow Slave".
Your story is amazing. Keep it up, honestly. it is progressing at a perfect pace. Curious to see how the world shapes and how you expand on it. My only criticism would be more characters per chapter I want to reeeadddd moreeeeee.♡ Keep it up
this is a good novel, the writing, the entrance is very catchy and that's where the true beauty is, as the story unfolds you get to love the MC just wish the author adds more drive to the MC make him more dynamic