The premise of the story is good, but to many adjectives are used for my tase. Every second sentence there is unnecessary adjectives added to the text.
Its a good novel but once you get past the free chapters the grammar dips a little. The mc has anger issues and lashes out at everyone and everything which gets kinda annoying
it's very intriguing and interesting I liked it
Nothing to say other than it's a great book and that you should just keep doing what you're doing!
well i am jus starting, hope it's good!!
come from chapter one and im here to say I lost braincells reading those insults, author please fix them?
Welp, hello traveler. I welcome you to my first novel. I'm doing my absolute best to be consistent and I'm constantly improving( or so I hope... )This novel, is my first experiment, and if you can bear with my first 2 chapters , you might even enjoy your time.I have this first arc drawn out, and I think it might even be kinda good...Also, if you care... could you tell me why you stopped by, or why my book captivated you enough to click on it? this would just help me understand what yall want!lots of love for checking me out❤?
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Great Story I like how you established the world first and not directly went to the fantasy part having an actual build up is refreshing. - Details -Grammar and Spelling: Great I couldn’t find any major flawsStory: Quite Interesting Main Character: Actually Evil and there is a reason for it we see how he became who he is.
guys sorry for late update, keep following please .
Nice story outline kudo's to the writer keep it up It was indeed an intriguing story outline
This Book is a work of art, the detailed writing and the spacing are good.I recommend it to you who loves amazing books. Keep up the good work author ♥️