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I'm only a fraction of the way into this but I'm hooked hardcoreGenuinely a very unique idea, and an interesting take on it as well. It being a prequel of sorts to Swtor leaves a whole lot of paths open, and it has my thoughts on overdrive trying to figure out what might come nextThis may update once I'm caught up with the remainder of what's up now, but so far, definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes
This book has had me gripped from the first chapter. It is do well written and the characters are amazing. The unorthodoxy of this book gives it a wonderful charm and i consider it one of my favourite books I read.Well done author,Mad respect for uou!
An enjoyable novel you got here. Writing quality. The narratives were clear and nice. Story development. The introduction of the Second life was in-depth and detailed. Along with the items and skills which explained well. Character design. The characters have their own distinct personalities that make them unique to each other. The world background is well crafted.Overall, this book is a great read and definitely going to stay in my collections. Great work author!
Enjoying the story so far.The book contains strong resemblance to other VRMMO novels, that's to be expected. The author even mentioned that it was inspired by the likes. Just thought to mention that first and foremost.What separates this from other novels of this genre is the MC, who is a returner from a Isekai world. I like his thought process. He thinks through things and knows what he's doing. His expierence in the Isekai world heightened his senses, and while you might say that makes him OP, and the story boring, the author depicts it as a liability. I want to see him overcome that.As mentioned before, the story is very much inspired by other novels of the genre. Thus, the world-building inside is very similar/the same to those of other stories. As a avid Eastern fantasy/lit rpg reader, I would've like to see some differences.Finally, I want to conclude this review with words about the writing. Info dumps are relatively low, and grammar is above average. I notice though the structure and fluidity between paragraphs can be improved on. There can be some rewording and better word choices to make the writing sound not so bland and flat. All in all, this is a great read for fans of LitRPG and VRMMO. Characters are great and story develops very well. I hope author keeps up the good work.Happy reading!
I'll be direct.Love the work, don't understand why it doesn't have more views, want more of these kinds of novels.So many people who are writing "reborn in a new world with a system" have ****ty grammar, nonsensical wish fulfilment storylines and stupid plot developments. I dont understand why they have 10s or 100s of times more views than this.Now, with my rant out of the way, I'll give my grade to boost the novels rating as a straight 5, and give some of my selfish opinionated thoughts. I have only read somewhat after ch70, but in my self entitled opinion, that is enough to judge.Writing quality - Hey, it's real English. Meaning there are no typos or stupid grammar or horribly translated, out of context sentences. And oh my god thank you for no repeating, overused and unimaginative descriptions like "it was like the difference between heaven and earth".Story development - Somewhat irregular, but not in a bad way. The important parts that you want to read are well detailed and narrated. The combat, the encounters, character interactions etc.The tedious things like battle aftermath or uneventful traning are sorted out in a few paragraphs.Character design - Interesting, strong(personality), and loveable characters. Or hateable depends on what floats ur boat.The speech patterns between the character are easily recognisable and consistent.World background - Didn't get much of it so far, but what I did, I liked.Introduced Countries/kingdoms/empires seem interesting and promising, and the world seems to slowly be coming alive.I still don't have any idea about the world's geography, like the amount of continents, world size or climate for that matter(other than it seems to constantly be cold. Maybe its winter idunno). But hey, neither do most Americans about earth(Ha). No offense, just stereotypeing.Overall, quite an enjoyable read and much more deserving than most of the trash on the top charts, and with better writing quality. Save a few.Hey, I said that I'd be direct, not quick.
I genuinely really like this novel. The characters are really well written and the interactions between them is simply superb. It is rather rare when a novel can make you feel emotion alongside the characters but this one certainly succeeded on that front!Well done Author!
Lord have mercy, this is some amazing content! I am utterly in love with the authors writing skills, they are out of this world! I bow in amazement, and give you you're well-deserved crown! The story is original, well thought of, and contains some amazing characters! Other than that, i love how long the chapters are - something a lot of people on this app slack on, but not you! I will definitely come back for more, no doubt about it. Thank you for sharing this amazing content with us, dear author <3
This book is worth everything... ??????It has the perfect leads and characters Mystery, romance, humor and action ?You would regret if you don't read it Just try once and you will love it...
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Honestly, I am not into Sci-fi but this book worth my time. I am really glad I came across this. Moreover the story background is greatly described & characters are well explained. Well done!
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