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MC is just a simp and extremely naive he simply always goes on donating all the information he has free of cost and then gets lied to or gets betrayed, especially by girls, and his character doesn't even develop even after such setbacks, so the character development of mc is poor.The story has a lot of potential but the author doesn't develops mc's character so it is good only when you read it to pass time.The story is extremely well defined. It has nice world development and very good power system.But still the mc's naive character without signs of development even after all the suffering irritates you alot, I personally feel that if author had developed MC's navie and simp character properly then this novel could have been in top rankings
I love that your idea is very different from the usual reads on the app. The astral projection thing is totally thrilling, and I am curious about the story's development. Please update soon.
This is nice! I will be expecting hard time for this one.Please read my novel, Origin Court: Accepting Disciples With A System. Thankss!!!!
Did they drop this book? I dont see it anymore in the trial read or voting.AAAAAAAA
This is so good I know it’ just a start but I love a unique spin
its goooooooooooooooooooooodddddddd thats all.. hahaha
A story of how an underworld kingpin (after dying) transmigrates into a world closely resembling ancient China.The greatest problem with this story? Story development, and character design. This story is driven by the protagonist (every character other than the cliche kind old sister trope may as well not even exist). This means that the characterisation of the protagonist is immensely important.However...the protagonist's characterisation is all over the place. The protagonist during his past life was a cold, brutal, ruthless kingpin. After transmigrating, he meets his old sister...and in an instant his heart begins to soften. What kind of silliness is this? As the story goes on, the protagonist decides he must be a 'good guy' for the sake of the people who care for him (his mother, and older sister). This characterisation is so naive and silly that it left me absolutely flabbergasted.A story with good potential ruined by the hypocritical redemption of the protagonist.
Honestly, besides the fact that a non-human in a video game seems cool. There is nothing else special to this bookGf of years turns out to be a gold diggerHis parent owes somebody money he needs to earnWishfuliment to the fullest (both handsome and top of his class but still bullied) With the power of Anger/friendship he evoles in game!The stupidity this novel has displayed is incredible.
Honestly, the first 5 chapters had some mistakes but I persevere a little bit too since I'm interested in the plot. It was pretty obvious the author was a newbie in writing and always asked for help and advice. But as I read further, I can see his improvements. His writing style becomes more amazing and I got hooked on the story before I knew it. Continue the good author!!!
Basically mc reincarnates into a silkworm farmer or whatever and loses some stuff becomes a slave I think not sure about that one and gets enrolled into dragon tamer school meets someone characters gets a ORGINAL pet which is a crocodile/alligator and gets some funny and cute moments between them. It is basically "Start by contracting sprites" in a medieval era but not as good in my opinion.
Una historia con un enfoque que aunque no es unico esta bien desarrollado con una trama hasta ahora bien construida y con un enorme margen para explotar