there arent new weapons just magic and spears were always really good weapons. plus as a unrivaled being a magician is a bad idea for him
it is really lovely thise is a series which i would follow personally as a new reader thise is really good
the ntr just ruined it. I mean the was trash but u could pass ur time with it but ntr just ruined everything.
Dawg… when are u gonna update.. it’s been a month.. are u dropping.. then get my hopes up only to drop em..
In simple terms, this is a GREAT NOVEL, and needs more recognition.Now let's ddep dive...Pros:The world-building is pretty spot-on – not too complicated, not too simple.I love the MC's personality unpredictable yet intriguing.Side characters are well-fleshed out.I didn't spot any grammatical mistakes.The pacing is Just right!Cons:Occasionally, the descriptions of scenes are excessively lengthy.In very few cases MC's decisions/actions seem confusing and sudden(**spoiler **like how he killed Freya and the prostitute and Tiga) although that seems to be part of his personality but I hope they make sense down the line.My expectations:Mary, second most explored side character in terms of screen time, needs significant character development. The current Ren couldn't care less about the pain she caused the previous Ren. She's basically worth zilch to him as long as she's not in his way. Currently, she's just a hypocritical and narrow-minded character. But, if her character stays the same till the end, it's gonna feel like a waste of time. She'll end up as a brain-dead character not worth the time invested. Let's hope that doesn't happen! Her character arc should logically conclude, regardless of her eventual romantic choices.Whether this novel goes harem or not, it's cool either way. But every girl involved should get some solid character development, showing off what makes them unique and strong. Ren's relationships shouldn't just be for show.That's all for now...Great work author and ... DON'T DARE DROP
VR GAME novel with harem is one of my favorite and this novel gives be the same vibe as shura's wrath and evil dragon against the heaven.i am enjoying so far and very excited to read more chapters .
I don't know if my review on my book is still up or not. It shows up for me but not when I log out so I'll try to leave another one.Welcome to another yuri filled journey and hope to see you all enjoy this as much as I'm enjoying writing this.It's sad that I won't be able to know u less you either vote with power stones , leave a comment or a review (i expect you to do that to let me know you are there)Rest, i'll come back for later.
So far from what I've read it's seems to be a really good story and I feel it could go far. Keep up the great work and sending out chapters. Love you man
This! people! this is the Story about the System that you should definitely give a try! This story has a Fantastic Premise and unlike what the name suggests this is not the typical story about fantasy with System like power system. this is an actual Scifi story about Technology and how it can be used to do productive things and benefit Humanity.Though I love this story I can't help but see some typos and mistakes here and there along with a Strange choice of words that could be easily fixed. overall this story is easy to understand if you don't various appropriately placed scientific words.Since that mistake can be easily fixed and doesn't cause a major interruption to the story combine with my own limited knowledge of Grammar I think this one still deserves the five star on writing. give it a try and you will see how Great this story is.
Ahhhh!!!!! all of my beloved tags in one single xianxia novel !!!!!!! Gandalf is this heaven ???Enough BS. Loved your story. An enjoyable read.Finally I found a hidden gem. Thank you a d please dont drop it. ?
A Chinese version of the Japanese light novel, where a high school student goes to a magical isekai world with a smarthphone?...........................
hmm... iit's like those cultivation novels, full of face slaps, dumb enemies, young masters and his lackeys, and the most annoying thing that I found was the east of chapters describing how beautiful the immortal ice phoenix is ... that was plain annoying, seriously, so many paragraphs in different chapters saying how her curves are soul mesmerizing and so on... well if you like cultivation novels, just without the cultivation part this might be a novel for you... Chapter 84.