Baba mi. Shey na you dey call football soccer? Why na?
Your synopsis is on key Author, from the start of your book I've been hooked????Nice writing styles hun..... continue the good work.I dont fancy genres like this but you caught me by surprise so continue the good work Author!!!
Website : qidian chinaViews : 7.95millionRating : 8.7(427)Chapters : 450+Status : completed Word count : 1.13million author level : lv5 No of works : 2 Disscussion : 69561Year started : 2017Chinese title : 低维游戏
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It was maybe one of the most original and interesting story I've read so far. The plot was intriguing. The characters blend together. However, it was very slow pace. The development of the story is sometimes too slow.
Author is a really cool dude, you can find him on discord, and he also write really well! I think he should make his own discord! Like if you agree with me!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I once tried to read it... but it was too overpowering...It is what it the title says it is... don't read if you don't like OP Stories and if you compare with what you considered OP before it was just normal novels... compared to OP System
concept is interesting the characters are well fleshed out. the world background is well made, there are no obvious grammatical errors, it is an interesting plot and the story is quite catchy.
translation becomes bad with each character
GODLY! Just the thing I wanted! The starting chapters are easy going but the current state seems cold and cunning!!! Please be like author sama!!!
Writing quality criticism:" This is wrong way to space quotation marks . ""This is the right way to space quotation marks."Character design criticism:Readers will appreciate it if you describe how the main character looks, what he wants to do overall, and what his favorite things are. Favorite things as in hobbies, quirks, etc. In other words detail! Give me something to help imagine the scene.Word background criticism:What year is it? How does that time period differ? Has peoples fashion sense changed? Describe the environment in the planet. Anything else about the human culture different? Is KFC still on the downturn in the United States?!! Is the United States now called The Colnel Confederacy? Thanks