Memoirs of Love

Writing quality criticism:" This is wrong way to space quotation marks . ""This is the right way to space quotation marks."Character design criticism:Readers will appreciate it if you describe how the main character looks, what he wants to do overall, and what his favorite things are. Favorite things as in hobbies, quirks, etc. In other words detail! Give me something to help imagine the scene.Word background criticism:What year is it? How does that time period differ? Has peoples fashion sense changed? Describe the environment in the planet. Anything else about the human culture different? Is KFC still on the downturn in the United States?!! Is the United States now called The Colnel Confederacy? Thanks

what a beautiful book! it has a message, a good one, one that keeps you looped in. yoou write with a melody and i keep trrying to hear all the notes. well done!

To be honest, and I have to say, this is a good book. I am giving this story a 4.4 rating because one—I love the background; two—the plot is interesting and three— the actions scenes. This story had me going, truly. For example, I asked myself, why did that guy from the first three chapters, can't remember his name, had to give an innocent baby such a destructive power, and when the bullies finally got what was coming for them, I was like yes. Get them off your back Kai. The boy is literally just passing through life, which makes his future all the more promising. I am diffinitely adding this story to my library. Great job author.

''Thanks I had just broken last month, though thanks to that endless killing. Of those Sects of the Human race.'' One could find the hidden killing intent in his voice.

"How can you publicly harass and molest an opposite sex with an innocent mind?"

Even after checking her bracelet she could only find a chocolate and drink.