PIECE OF CRAP..................NOT WORTH READING........THE STORY DEVELOPMENT IS SHITTY.........THE CHARACTERS ARENT FULLY DESCRIBED.......CRAAPPY NOVEL....
First of all, I'm the first to review this future master piece!Now let's talk about the book, or well, chapters.Only two chaps rn, so can't say much, but since I know the author and I've seen her work before, I'm sure that this one is going to be a hit.The start of the book is good as well, the plot although not something extremely rare, it's still better than most of them you'll find out there on WN.Yeah, there are not many chaps to talk about the plot but a man can guess right?And as I said at the start, this is going to be a future master piece!That's all for the review.
great book, this is the first book in reading where the MC becomes something that shares no similarity to humans and it's amazing. His relationship with his siblings is developed so well and actually matters. He's actually smart and uses his brain. The descriptions of the settings are so vivid and enrapturing, one of the best books I've read
Quick review after 5 chapters. No obvious spelling or grammar mistakes. Decently written MC, though stereotypical naive. So far seems like it is worth a try, especially if you like the more typical fantasy stories.
Seems like an interesting new readI hope that you update regularly......................................................................................................
Greetings all! This is the author of V.I.R.A.L, nearly four months ago I gave a review for my book, giving people a rough idea of what the story was going to be about. A lot has changed then with two more volumes and the fifth one well on its way. Because of this, I wanted to update my review to be in line with the, what I believe, is the quality of the book. Much of the points I put through with that review still stand. A slowish pace character-focused superhero story with multiple main characters. This will not change as it's my characters that really carry the story, don't just take my word for it, others reviews agree, and while the story is now really kicking off, I'm only under halfway through the story I want to tell. The other problems people had with this story I've tried my best to fix, I've gone over each chapters improving the grammar and spelling mistakes to the best of my abilities! (There will still be spelling mistakes, of course, I'm one person) which will make for an easier reading experience. I've also added small changes and additions to the first few chapters to give a more exciting beginning and an insight into the world my story take place in.Speaking of world-building. I've made it my absolute goal to make my story a living breathing one you can believe in. Although it only takes place in serval locations, I believe that I've really built up the backstory and history of my world into one of wonder and mystery waiting to be explored over the last few volumes. With the main threat teased through the book well on its way, I'm more excited than ever to keep building the story and history of this world for you all to read.Lastly, I want to thank everyone for reading; if it weren't for you, I wouldn't be able to improve my book the way I have. I'm always looking for ways to make the best story possible, and any criticism is always appreciated, and I love every review and comment made. So as of today, this is my definitive review that will be on the front page until the last chapters. The first review I gave my book 3.8 stars which I thought was fair at the time of the story. But now with more chapters, world-building, character development and grammar checks, I can happily give myself 4.4 stars. I hope both new and old readers keep up with this ever-growing story through 2021 and beyond!
The story is lacking in emotion. I feel the MC is just a third party making comments. It's like He's not the MC but rather a side character. I'm pretty sure a side character has spoken more then he has. He also doesn't have any noticeable personality. He's kinda dumb really. All the characters are really. Their like children, even though their at least 15. It's like they can't think for themselves. Example being when asked why to become a adventurer. It all seems forced in the plot, like their forced to not think.I've only read till chapter 30 but you I see no change in the story that has hooked me. The only selling point is the genre and him potentially being a dragonking. But even that is not enough of a selling point with no fleshed out character development or world development. The only reason I've not given it a 1 star is because I didn't read the full story, but I just couldn't. 30 straight chapters with nothing interesting happening. Yeah no.Another reason is because I commend your effort you at least put in making the story. Good luck though and hope you improve.
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True it my not be the best novel out here, but it got its own vibe.I really like your work, I've been voting it not until you post the last chap.
interesting synopsis and great start. The first chapter is enough to keep one wanting for more. The author did a great work to the vivid description of scenes and characters which in it's sense makes the story more interesting to read. I highly recommend this novel to everyone. Great job author, thumbs up.
The plot sounds like Trafford Trading Club novel. I mean both the mcs in each novel can make someone`s wish come true with something valuable like lifespan
The quality of the descriptions is amazing. The story telling is great and it keeps you looking forward to what's next. After looking over the fact that the chapters are longer than normal, its amazing read. So as long as you don't mind long chapters, this is a great read