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Honestly really liked it first 30 chapters but the moment it goes away from being just the Mc to the guild is when it becomes sloppy. The difference between the growth rate in power when he was alone and when he is with them is stupid. Another thing author was very focused on levels and details of the Mc but what happened after that nothing no show cased in level growth, 10*Exp potions never mentioned or used, which could easily give him a lead, another problem is he is a regress or but his knowledge doesn't seem oh so great.And lastly I feel that it was too rushed to introduce side characters as not alot of time was given to the Mc for us to develop a connection with so now if the Mc dies I wouldn't even care and could continue reading the story
I have only read about 20 chapters, but nothing much different from other mmo genres. Nothing outstanding nor anything bad. Iam only posting this review due to the low ratings i have seen. It deserves a 4 or even 3.5.
I reccomend you to read this novel if you like MC with travel between realms, he often move between earth and three other realms, at least for now. He act more like a demon, incubus, but he still has his humanity. He is deeply care for his circle, but he is also cruel to his enemies. Each women have their own strong points, but some of them a bit slow, if you know what I mean. The system not a pushover, and the AI always act base on his order, but it also give him ideas and solutions.I think it's enough, and you guys can check it for yourselves.
"Eat your mother's foot! You were born unlucky!" — Fan Cuihua's dialogue is absolutely vicious and I love her for it. The woman has a voice and she uses it. Every line she speaks in these chapters is pure venom wrapped in peasant-mother energy. Meanwhile, Fenniang's dialogue is completely different—short, practical, but loaded with meaning. "My daughter has a name!" is three words that carry more weight than most novels' entire dialogue sections. The author clearly understands that different characters should sound different, and it shows. Zhuo Chang'an is the quiet one, speaking in actions more than words. When he tells Xiaohu "My Ling'er doesn't owe you anything anymore," it's cool, measured, and completely shuts down the conflict. He's the steady older brother who carries the family. And the great-grandfather—oh man, his dialogue is warm and crackly like his voice should sound. "You're trying to fool your great-grandfather!" he says after hearing about eleven eggs, and you can practically hear the old man's cane tapping the floor. The narrative voice itself is also worth discussing. It's got this wry, slightly irreverent tone that matches Zhuo Ling's internal perspective. When she thinks about the hen being a "fighter jet among hens" and wonders about their "poor backsides," that's a modern sensibility crashing into a primitive setting, and it's hilarious. The author doesn't over-explain or get pretentious. The prose moves. It tells you what you need to know and then gets out of the way. Even the dialogue tags are minimal—just enough to ground the scene without slowing it down. And that ending with the farts? Pure comedic timing. No moral, no lesson, just the family reacting to bodily functions after a big emotional meal. The author knows when to be serious and when to let the absurdity breathe.
so i think i found another top rank material...good job author.. i just suggest please dont drag an arc in your story in the future...so far.. this ones really good... worth the power stone i will give you for few days in the future..
I haven't read a single chapter but it mentions bears in the synopsis so immediately 5 stars no questions.I love when bears get recognition
A good story, an unconventional approach to the world of cultivation, against the background of many other novels to stand out as an unconventional protagonist. Throughout the reading of 40 chapters, I can say the novel is very promising.I put 5 stars more in advance because I hope to reveal the full potential of the story.P.S. Small flaws are everywhere, but if they are not thrown into the eye and while the novel is being read, unnecessary questions are not asked, everything is fine.
it's rather baffling, really, the plot was.. especially where his parents gone overseas just to pursue cooking leaving their son and daughter alone, 8/yo and 3/yo respectively, tending to themselves and some debt on top of it..how irresponsible were parents in that world? if you create something like 13 or 15 year old kid, I still can accept it actually..
If he "smiles bitterly" one more time I'll kill him.The protagonist is such a moron.He really thinks he'll find an easy and cheap way to cultivate in the common library, as if others wouldn't use this if it existed. Of course he "smiles bitterly" after each reading.I just don't like the protagonist I really don't
it is a good story even I that rare reading face slapping rinse rland repeat genre read this until latest chapters.just need to ignore nationalism , racism, sexism and idiot people