the childhood volume may slightly be very quite wholesome but i swear if anything bad ever happens to Tom will i do some not very nice things. also Josh, he's pretty cool.
Es la mejor novela que he visto de fútbol con sistema pero hay un par de rellenos bastante espesos y comienzos de capítulos repetitivos, literalmente se habrá ducha con como 60 veces normalmente 2 cada día si bien esta correcto de vez en cuando ponerlo todo el rato aburre
This one peaked my interest. Keep going and don't drop it Mr. Author.This one peaked my interest. Keep going and don't drop it Mr. Author.This one peaked my interest. Keep going and don't drop it Mr. Author.
i'm the author. hopefully everyone can enjoy my story. feel free to give feedback.
I'm honestly wondering what on Earth am I watching because ... I don't really know what's to come next. But still updating the novel with new chapters makes it decent to read it more.
Volume 1 is undergoing a revision or rewrite. I have to heavily edit some mistakes and inconsistent points I've written. I'll update it sometime at October.
Writing Quallity: goodUpdating Stability: don’t care Story Development: Slow, boring, repetitiveCharacter Development: Horrible. Main character constantly goes against the “cold blooded and ruthless super soldier” personality given to him. World Background: Nothing special. Overall: A book with good grammar but a horrible idea, horrible development, a horribly written main character, and a generic world background.
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a good book with a lot of potential .just change ur writing style a bit .
Full story is on MTL. 190 chapters. It’s a good story, but many parts are just a bit too rushed. And like most light novels I’ve read, the ending is incredibly rushed.
Up until chapter 1502 I really enjoyed this book, it had its lulls sure, but which book doesn’t. Chapter 1503 onward however the names and certain things like the human race translation are jarringly bad in comparison to what came before. It’s still mostly translated fine but it feels like the one translating it went from a person to a machine, and whoever uploading it doesn’t do a double check. It upsets me because I still enjoy the book, and am willing to pay money to continue reading, but it feels like I am paying for google translating with how some paragraphs read. There was one where three characters were mentioned in one sentence and all their names were botched.
Everything going for the story is fantastic. From the characters to the story line, especially at the start when he is arrogant for his cheat then back to zero. Love how the monsters are getting their mutual level between the people of the town and need to have more of this right now! I would spend all my SS for this novel. Absolute refreshing novel with the mini story and comedy HAHAHHAHA