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At the time of this review I've read 310 chapters.This novel lacks a coherent story, a sensible cultivation system, a meaningful setting and pretty much everything else.It feels like a random mash of the usual cliches (random mc OPness, random girls following mc, the random villain). Easily Er Gen's worst piece of work.Don't bother reading this as not only will it waste your time it will also leave you irritated. Consider yourself warned.
The novel start is good. Writing is decent. MC of this novel is different from other villain novels as author is trying to make unique story with same genre.
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Absolutely the best novel of this genre that I have ever read, the story is top notch and the characters are well made, and the world is interesting and well made even though it is only the sixteenth chapter I am already absolutely hooked to this story. But if I had to say one bad thing that would be the typical reader problem of not enough chapters :( but do not take that as an insult or something like that since I totally get that putting out more than a few chapters per week or something like that is not possible with this kind of writing quality. This would be the first novel that I would be willing to pay for chapters even though I usually do not do that, but if possible would definitely prefer that it would be free. Keep up the great work and keep writing:) all the best to you.
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this story starts slow but its a fun read and a break from op mc's and conventional gimmicks which adds to its charm any one looking for a good story should give it a go.
Cats all over the world (those not sterilized) gain superpowers and they can share those powers with humans. MC, of course, is OP with his game system where he can make the cats his pets and gain multiple powers. System gives him missions that he can complete to level up. It’s a fun read, although full of nonsensical elements. MC’s personality seems to be changing, and I hope it’s in a good way.
Normally I tend to avoid reading novels that relies heavily on face slapping as a regular theme since it bores me to death, but intelligent and humorous face slapping like this novel, IRAS or AVL are very welcomed.There are several good reasons why you should read this novel:1. The MC finds real love very quick, but his pursuit to win said love, how the love develop and how the couple interact are very realistic, which is a pleasure to read and the love interest is extremely lovely, intelligent, funny and likeable.2. The four furry kids. For me Li Du's four furry children are the best part and I always get the greatest laughs when a chapter includes them or is about them. They are intelligent, very much humane and basically children in furry disguise, but with animal instincts to boot.3. What little drama there is are never drawn out to point of getting boring, but is swiftly handled with humorous and intelligent face slapping. It's a joy to read how Li Du executes his devious plans of retribution, every time.4. The novel is just different, never in a million years would I've imagined a novel about storage auction.Serious props to the author and translator!!!
The core of the novel is extremely solid, it is entertaining and immersive and it wants to be told. The characters seem lively and depicted well, it's a solid novel. Don't feel like you need to establish authors notes in the middle of a chapter though, as that breaks the immersion. Especially in something as important as a first paragraph which is huge for a novel. If a reader doesn't understand something, we'll ask. Then you can reply to a comment :) The other detractor that I see, which gets better over time in your chapters, is grammar and sentence structure. Every once in awhile it'll get away from you and pull the reader out of the story.I understand English isn't your first language, don't worry, it happens to those of us that have it as a first language all the time. but I do think it would be worth going back through and editing your early chapters (especially the first one as that's what is going to hook new readers) as your skill improves.You're definitely headed in the right direction! Keep up the good work.
One of the classic story of Jin Yong ( Louis Cha ). Aka Xiao Ao Jiang Hu starring character Ling Hu Chong. A Proud wanderer indeed, where along the way meets his future wife from a different sect.