A child of a bad family trying his best to make the best of his new life. I wonder if we will ever meet his old family that he lost. So sad he lost so much and putting up with more as time goes on and doing everything to keep the peace. Def a page turner! * // *
A very interesting read indeed, I found it to be a new concept in a System Genre, haven't read a novel like this still now. well-written characters and excellent story development. Way to go author.And one more thing.*Blooop!!!!* This is good.
My kind of story, fantasy with a dark twist, where the MC is always fighting to survive, the world grows with each chapter and the author knows how to describe it well, besides all the fights of course.
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I don't want to be shameless. To be honest, I'm only writing this for fun and forging my English. If you have problems with it, I don't care. If you don't like it, then don't, no one is forcing you to read it. If you want to trash talk my novel, spare me from that.Goodluck at reading this crappy novel.
Excellent Work. The synopsis, the characters, the writing quality, and the story development... great. There are not many chapters but these chapters are more than enough to show the story potential. And it has great potential, especially in the author's hand.You're doing an excellent job, keep it up.
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The story is really emotional , I cried a lot in some chapters and laugh till the point of crying in some chapters ! I really enjoyed the story and was really happy about the ending as I was thinking it would end tragically !!?The story is really nice ?
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Although the idea was good, the execution isn't. The MC is almost brain-dead attacking people with obviously more power than him."Magnetism" MC:" What dat?"His enemies are equally brain dead and keep talking to eachother all the time, changing their plan every few seconds.Talent test: 'Do I even have to say it?'Plot armor? I don't see anything else, he does attacks that come out of nowhere while he has 0 cultivation. Awakens system just as he was dying.