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This book is very good in terms of writing style, word choice, and story development.
People out there who haven't tried reading this book should give it a try.
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I have enjoyed a lot of similar genre stories on this platform and with my background I felt the urge to put my own work out there. I am dedicated to putting out flawless chapters and if you locate any grammatical or spelling errors, please point them out and they will be immediately fixed.
I am consistently working on creating a nice balance between chapter updates and will committedly release chapters on the daily. I wish I had put more work into the first chapters and published more than 1,000 words each chapter, I may go back and up their word count without adjusting the actual flow of the chapter. I maintained a minimum of 1k words per chapter up until chapter 30 at which point I raised it to 1500 and will not go below that.
The story will continually be developed and follows Marcus and his adventures through a game that has much more going on behind the scenes than he had initially thought. The risks will constantly be increased as the story progresses and the novel becomes more fleshed out.
I absolutely love creating characters and having them fill roles within the story. The cast shall be expansive and constantly growing and decreasing. I aim to have no two characters alike and want to have a nice variety in the main and supporting cast.
I love adjectives and really enjoy growing the world around our cast and hope that shows through my work. I love world building and generating the setting that our characters are in.
I really hope you guys enjoy the story and take the time to like, vote, and comment, I read every comment and am more than happy to reply to your questions. Feel free to join the discord to see more behind the scenes information and connect with fans.
Good story and characters but irresponsible mc that doesn't think about the consequences of his actions and just says "i'll handle it" when he clearly isn't capable of handling some of the enemies he's making.Story also progresses really slow because of filler and multiple perspectives- in some mini arcs mc is only in about 50-60% of the scenes- but it doesn't feel slow until you realise it's been 200 chapters and the story has barely moved. The writing quality is like a good MTL. Sometimes words are used incorrectly completely changing the meaning of the sentence. All sentences still make sense if you just change a few words in your head while you're reading it.Meanwhile, the author's favourite colour is blue.
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Very fast pacing, short chapters and introducing gods into the mc's sphere in the 40 chapters, he obtains a very broken item/soul that gives him a quest to destroy a guild because why not and literally gives him a 2x multiplier on all his skills, like what we have been introduced to a goddessnd in 10 chapter just gets killed for a gods vs gods plot that author is setting up with the mc being a lvl 10 player
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Just realized I never gave a revie so here we go. This is by far my personal favorite novel on the app that I have read so far. The characters are enjoyable, the story is engaging and overall just fantastic writing. I highly recomend this novel for anyone that likes dragons and any other fantasy genre.
This story has a pretty good system, that I'm surprised that no one else has thought of it. The story is like most system stories, which is cool and all. But the thing that makes me want to continue reading this is the system. I haven't read any system stories as of late, and this might be able to scratch my itch.
Thanks, author for sharing your story.
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Translator does good work. Praise him. The Work is **** though. While I understand a story has to have a start to grow from way too many people have pits in heads to force clichéd agravating 'plot' threads.
The Mc doesn't think like a human. He's egoistic to a self sabotaging insane extreme only to suddenly randomly give a damn. At dumb point.
He can't seem to understand on a basic level the ideas of reputation or standardized credentials despite having trained as a doctor and so repeatedly fucks up trying to get hired. Only for the poor people looking for a doctor to faf about in guilt for rejecting him when he looked exactly like a quack and scammed and couldn't answer relevant medical questions. Then the narrative expects us to laugh at them. So agravating.
He essentially wasted strategic resources that might have save his family.
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