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This novel's not my cup of tea. I don't mind some plot holes but this author writes sentences as if they were directed to kids. I can't stand reading that tone, as if mocking the readers.The introduced characters sometimes behave as if they were 5 reincarnated teenagers from modern world, not natives of the primitive world.
So the MC is a lazy character who does not want to do anything, mainly because his system requires it. First he transmigrates to this powerful family and works hard until he is tested to have trash talent. At that point he thinks about his family and realizes that there really is no point in him working hard as his family is one of the most powerful in the world. This unlocks his system. It offers him rewards as long as he keeps being lazy. This being the case and with a very supportive family who does not cast him out for poor talent, he does just what the system requires for his most optimal cultivation. Later his family gets into trouble and is attacked by 2+1 of the other top level families in the world. At this point he has been lazy for 10 years which change the character of anyone. At first he does not realize there is a problem as he does not keep track of things. When combat breaks out he realizes that his family is under attack. At this point he monitors the situation hoping that he does not need to take action as that would expose his top of the world cultivation. This is fairly natural as he has been lazy for 10 years. But with the love and care he has received from his family he first tries to act as a leader to protect the family without exposing himself. Then he makes a move under the guise of a talisman given to him by his father. Finally when the 3rd family decides to join in to attack his family and those who are the backbone of the family are in danger he finally takes action to save them which also exposes his cultivation.This is a very fast paced story especially to start with. It starts with him discovering his talent then the system unlocking and then a 10 year time-skip. The story was actually better than most of the reviews suggested, mainly because the MC follows a natural progression based on habit.
why mc become week again in volume 9.....
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It's great and refreshing to have a villain mc. A cunning one made it even better. It would be great if the updates were more frequent. I have no problems with the translation. Good work and thank you for letting us read this story.
I loved this story and all that goes with it! It was different than what I was expecting but it was still a great read.The one thing I would nitpick at while reading this all in a couple days, is the fights. Sometimes they just drag on and on! There is nearly 100 chapters of fighting and dungeon diving in less than 300 chapters.
In this case, the author is right. The real power is picking up plastic waste. Separate Carbon from Hydrogen and reuse separately but the author will never mention the work hour scale because if the MC really uses power in an industrial way it just won't have a plot.
Review 1 - 5/12/19I am writing this review to bolster my confidence, and to increase the number of ratings on my fiction. It is also a way to record my progression as a writer.
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It has game elements and a system. MC is cunning and gives off Devil's Cage kinda vibes. His power is pretty cool too. He gets points which can make his abilities better when he eats monsters. Written really well.Some places made me feel that translation could've been a bit better. Otherwise it's really good.
bad writing or rather translation i lost brain cells
