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Don't worry about the grammar. You can hire an editor for that. A proofreader can also do the job of finding plot holes for you. Now, zombie apocalypse novels are a tough genre. You need to research all weapons be it melee or firearms, etc. You also need to be realistic as it was a modern survival thing. I can see that the story is going good so far and it has potential. The direction of the story is also superb! Good thing is, the characters are lifelike. I hope you improve your craft shortly. Will wait for that time to come ?
simple to say it has an interesting dark story world building is still going on at first it was base on post apocalypse theme still surpriseingly good development
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read
Good novel you will love it very interesting
I like the premise of the story, there haven't been any annoying stereotypical plot points and the characters are pretty good.The writing quality isn't the best right now, but when author gets an editor that will be great too I expect. Overall I enjoy the story a lot right now ?
I've read what's available, and honestly I really like it. reader The TL is solid, the pace is good, the characters are all distinct, and the world-building is quite decent too. welldoneThe MC isn't the highlight of this story- he plays a central role, certainly, but this novel focuses a lot on his 'human tools', and it's all the better for it. The pace could be improved a little - Chen Qianxue's segments of the story are already getting a bit dull, but the introduction of the new character makes it more palpatable.The concept this is about plays out really well, and I can't wait to see where it goes. More twists will have to be introduced so it doesn't get too stale, so this might fall off after ~150ish chapters, but the 40 here are solid. ehhThe comedy is done nicely, as is the relationship between the characters, though very little of that currently exists. The dialogue is written well, most events seem reasonable and logical, and I'm really curious to see how this goes forward.All in all, I'd say this is a solid 7/10 currently. It's not ground-breaking, but it's a fun read and easy to get into, and it has a lot of potential for the future. bow
Congratulations and keep up the good work, I always support you. The novel game this time is cool, it feels like we are playing the game ourselves, continue. level up.
nice to read this novel. cant wait to read the next chapter. i hope this novel will be chosen. the story so far so good to read. the development of the sfory kinda fast but not boring.
He is literally a Son of a *** Simp can't even reject a Girl that he not loves to not become his Wife..All Simp Author go to h. .ell.?
A unique world created with terms readers are used to like mana, dungeons, orcs, and goblins but isn’t afraid to branch out creates a interesting world that I’m glad I found.
Only one chapter is out so there's not much to say, but man, did it get intense. I like the writing style and even though the plot isn't there just yet, it for sure does have me looking forward to the next chapter. I also love the relationship between the brothers, it's cute. This is a great start, keep up the good work author-kun!