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E tão ruim assim ? Meu caro compatriota se puder me indicar uma novel de romance decente agradeço
yeah. it's like she doesn't have her own selfness
Excellent story. The story contains drama, comedy and action.
Need to read it, people.
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It's very interesting finding something like this. Used to the guys having this kind of system and not girls. So, it's refreshing. Give me some guys, been looking forward to that.
I gonna be honest here after reading first 200 chapters. The forced tragedy for a guy who on earth before his reincarnation was top tier in a mafia family but somehow and some weird reason he decided not to use that prior knowledge to get his situation better from the beginning? This is honestly dumb as f*** development not sure how this is ranked as high on the story dev side of things when it's all forced bs
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Novel is good except that saint MC. so annoying .His ex cheated on him and got abused whom she cheated with and our Chad MC think it's his fault he should apologise to her.
The author only uses question marks and random commas… doesn’t even use quotation marks for dialogue. This makes the story into a complete mess. Also, the chapters are really short like 4 chapters should be put together just to be a normal length. Don’t waste your time reading this mess.
Author review here, moreover a logline:Starting with the first 4-6 chapters, we lay the groundwork, introducing our main character and why he end up with AI, and the reason for entering into the underworld. Following this setup, expect plenty of action and story within this mafia world. Just to be clear, there won't be any romance or harem elements in this novel. Instead, you'll find a story packed with excitement, action, and a touch of thriller.I'm not a pro writer, so there might be mistakes. Feel free to point them out or share any suggestions you have. Your support, even with small actions like commenting on chapters, means a lot to this newbie author.Thank you.
It has potential, but it has some points that should be improved in my opinion. The MC is very passive, has no ambition. I understand that caution is necessary, but there is a fine line between caution and cowardice. If the MC had ambition, he would look for more women to marry, so his power would increase. With more power the MC would expand his territory, his fame would increase, and more notable women would appear to be his concubine, so his power would exponentially increase the amount of women he has, like a snowball. Currently the MC just waits for someone to attack, then fight back, his only desire is to keep his rural town. It's really disappointing to see a novel with so much potential go down this path. Without power everything he has can be taken away at the whim of the powerful, ambition is a basic need in this kind of chaotic world.
Just based on the prologue it's quite good. Also the release rate is good according to the per week release i see. Suggest me some books for similar taste boys.
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