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It's a damn shame the novel got dropped. One of my favorites that I've been following for quite a while. I'm not understanding why it was dropped though. It was fairly popular and had very few filler chapters and didn't dwell on the unimportant things. It had just enough explanation of his training while not going to in depth. If I had any complaints it woulda been that the women would come outta left field with their feelings for him but at least they had their own personalities.... DAMN SHAME!!!
I'm not sure what to say. But I will say one thing for sure. This story SUCK. god, it sucks. the author is trying to be mysterious by it getting stupid. I will say one thing for sure, this story has no beat. it simply getting boring.
So far the plot and pace are pretty good, I hope the story isn't rushed like in the old novel. If possible, make the MC's relationship with the current woman deeper first, before bringing up a new harem member.
FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC FANTASTIC
It's one of the best novels I've ever read..................................................................................................................
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Very good. Very good. Very good. Very good.
I really like this storyline but I'm very sorry to say that I have to convince myself after every chaper to continue with it.English isn't my mother tongue either and I don't dare to say that my English is perfect but after almost 80 ch. there is simply no improvement regarding the grammar and this is really bothering me.That novel has the potential to climb up in the rankings if the grammar is fixed.
Sadly some of the chapters were removed. We want those chapters????Plz post those chapters .As a football fan I have been waiting for this wn for some time n want to read the whole seriesThanking you,Lucifer_thelazy
⚠️ WARNING⚠️ READ AT YOUR OWN RISKA f-ing masterpiece of a story, read till chp 77 or 78 and if this story goes in the same as it has been going we will soon get another gem among novels. Just wanna thank the author for this awesome book.Writing Quality is awesome. Barely any mistakes.Story Development is intriguing and hooks you. The author is master of Dao of Cliffhangers.Character Design also delivers, the characters feel real, everyone has the own plus and minuses.Updating stability is good.World Background is also awesome. It's like peeling layers over mysteries and each layer pulls you deeper into the authors trap of making you want to read more.P.S. (Just my wish)If this story continues like this, with this Quality I believe we will also get a manhwa adaptation of this someday.
AMAZING!! So captivating
Love this book can’t wait for the next chapter
