Story has a good introduction and gets you interested in the story early on, daily chapters and interesting characters, and comedy. overall Good story so far?
**Brutal Mode** EngagedStarting a story is easy! Just drown the reader in so much info dumping and exposition that they can’t possibly escape! Once the reader is stuck, then trap them in a series of MC weak to strong building and ass-kicking of arrogant masters. They will never escape then and will be forced to read the rest of your story..Originality - 0/5 - It's a cultivation novel. No, wait! It's a System novel. Why not throw in naruto fanfic while you're at it? Oh LOL he was watching Naruto! Close enough. Wait Wait. Let me guess his cultivation system will be based on Dragon Ball? That will be the trifecta of Webnovel fads. Please ascend.Story - 2/5 There is a story. There is. This is not a paper on a system cultivator, is it? Am I reading one endless monologue? I am sure this story would be great if I could get past this wall of text hiding Mount Tai.Characters - 1/5 The characters speak to me. Literally. The MC rarely speak to someone else, unless its a cardboard cut out cliche. Parent, Grandpa. Quite literally named Grandpa trope so the author doesn't have to show anything about him to the reader #shortcut #efficientwriting. The reader will know from all the other copy and paste novels who use Grandpa. Teacher - angry and hates MC. Why? Who cares we need people in authority to be irredeemable illogical antagonists so the hero MC can make them look like fools in a few chapters.Flow - 5/5 The flow is excellent. I enjoyed reading this exposition. The Authors note explaining the yet to be introduced system was perfect. Why let the story show the system. Just tell the reader and yeah Authors note works perfectly. Btw When does the story start?
Give this a shotThe Mtls goodThe Chinese ver. Gets updated 1 chap a day go give it a try.You'll like it as Webnovel is lacking good novels these days
I keep seeing the comparison that everyone else is a returner. Yes, the MC is abandoned by god too, but he is left to struggle and survive. It is a bit slow at the beginning, but it showcases the MC growth and emotional state. A recommended must read.
This story starts out really great, but if you are here for the calm, lazy and fluffy (with delicious rice, tea and cute pet) ambiance (like I was), you will be in for disappointment. Having read ahead in the raws, the MC's personality starts to resemble that of Warlock of the Magic World more and more (so if you love the ruthless, no loose ends-no sympathy-no nonsense MC, this is it for you).
Very poor updating stability. The novel's translations started when the site was first launched and the other novels which started at same time have already reached 50+ chapters. I don't want to sound ungrateful but if you're promising 5chapters a week at least try to fulfil the promise. The series is behind 15 chapters. Also, as stated before few paragraphs are missing.
The first novel I completed and it's entirety. Don't regret a second of it.----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Would recommend to a first time cultivation reader. Would not recommend to a avid action adventure reader.Has a good start, some interesting cultivation methods and realistic love interests(at first); the pace pulls you right in. Took me over a 200ch to pull away and realize how lacking this novel is.MC has all good points and no bad points(his negative aspects are written positively); not realistic or relatable he is more like a cardboard superhero. I can't remember him ever fighting an opponent stronger then him, he just doubles his power and stabs everything with nakama power then it dies.The world building is pathetic; limited to the mc explaining some facts he found in books in two chs. The storyline is the typical; cultivators vs demons vs beasts vs otherworlders. With typical sociopathic humans helping the enemies. Had a lot of potential but everyone is just a stepping stone for mc to kill with character building. Not much happens and it is full of typical cliches; the dialogue makes me want to throw my phone its so dry. Again not realistic. The MC saves the main love interest during a life and death mission and the author even takes time to mention how she isnt the weak minded type of girl that falls head over heels over hero types at that moment. Like 10chs later they are living together. An inconsistant story imo with paper personalities.
A novel where you need to turn off the brain by 100%. Works I read 111 chapters of the novel.2.2/5
Very stale and cleche mc is retarded and ruins story a good concept though trash lkmit trash limtinbjnnnnnnh fleeing Biden green bruh nuff gift gift but then Nanking funky drug
Well, since mostly everyone who hasn't even read the book seems to be giving it 5 stars, I guess I'll make a comment on how disgusting, inconsistent and outright infuriating this MC and novel in general seems.From what I've read(other peoples' thoughts) the MC is a horny little **** who seems like the type to ***** over his own faults, then get free stuff thrown at his lap, in order to make the novel as appeasing as possible to all those sad, horny fucks out there.It's probably one of those no-brain, no-personality harems where no girl sticks around for longer than a few chapters, after which she's just a part of the ****fest once in a while, and no girl really has any personality whatsoever. Nor do they have any personality flaws.This is one novel I'll never read, don't be fooled by the "C31" I'm no on that ch, I just happened to click on it as this novel was updated.
There aren’ t even 10 chapters available right now, but I can already guess how this novel from HideousGrain is going to be. Same Multiverse as “God’s Eyes” and “Primordial Dimensions”. First chapters already with a introduction to this infinitely large planet ”Shima” which already got a small connection with God’s Eyes as Shima got mentioned there two times. Also directly starts with action that is not boring but instead lets you feel it yourself. Has the same power system as “God’s Eyes” and “Primordial Dimensions” but introduces a new mechanic, the spirit soul. Definitely going to read this one!