Trash absolute trash mc is abused every chapter different level of weak protagonists I read 50 chapters thinking it would get better it got worse more trash don’t read this trash don’t waste your time
I Enjoy This Novel I Have Found That My Happiness Skyrockets Through The Roof When A New Chapter Comes Out If You Can Can You Please Tell The Author "Thank You For This Novel I Find It Utterly Hilarious And Love It,""Thanks,"-Grim
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Qidian is changing the ratings of their novels so that they don't seem that bad (see thestatsguy comment). I don't mean to condemn their actions since they gotta earn money... But it doesn't feel right.
One of the best fics of this site Everything 5So much work into this bookNumber one goat MuahahahaHihihi haSiuuuuuuEl campeoooBagana Nani Wryyy
Dropped hardPositive: Translated very well. Just minor grammar mistakes- Background/secondary characters are more relatable then the MC (except the usual Novel 'enemies' who's IQ dropped like a rock)- 'Pokemon' fight scene is nicely written- The story has a nice flow and you can really understand and follow the story... ish. Has a nice idea but horrible execution. Explanation and reasoning bellow. ________________Negative: MC and the system and authors brain- MC in the beginning still behaves like a normal person who was transported to a new world. Good reasoning to try and repair relationship with sibling cause original Persona of the body was a dick.Suddenly System appears and story goes stupid.- Mix Pavlov + Stockholm Syndrome + Dumb author ideas/interpretation of a relationship.- system threatens MC with punishment if MC can't accomplish Quest/Mission. These with literal Torture (lighting that was triggered) or promise of Oblivion (erase Memories and deletions)- MC, under pressure, must train a rat where they both can die infinately but both experience how they died.MC trains rat among super monsters that the rat constantly dies. And when rat feels tired after fighting and beating a monster, MC kills rat to safe time cause when rat is reborn it's fully energetic again.- afterwards owner of rat comes to collect the rat and suddenly MC is totally emotionally attached to rat and gets angry/jealous why rat jumps for joy to the nonviolent pet owner.Story has nothing to do with Pet Store after a while. It's all about the food and training pet for others. Nothing about being a pet shop owner and it's development. Personal not sure if Author even knows what it's like have a pet.
IT'S UNDER HUGE EDIT! DON'T READ IT UNTIL NEXT ANNOUNCEMENT!!!
Another great book for the Queen Among series. I love that you really get to know the characters and the twists and turns they gp through. can't wait for more.
When will you update the new chapter? I just read all the chapters and wants to know the updating schedule if you have any. Love this story
Great story...Need some grammar work.
I totally agree with the other reader, please don't make the story too long till it boring
I would love to see a third story. I'm absolutely addicted to the story! You have been doing amazing and I'm so excited every time I see the update notification! Please no matter what ensure they get the happy ending they deserve!