This story is quite good and interesting. You should keep this story going author. I love it
I agree with what some of the other readers have said. Starting out, there is a little problem with the development of the harem members. Some of that gets resolved in later chapters. One thing it didn't like was that just like someone else said, it seems like the author wants to make it so one person from every world is "in love" with the mc. I'm all for the harem thing, but even so, that would be in my opinion too much.
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A billion times better than the usual qidian shit. This is honest to good rom-com slice of life, Chinese version.And it's good!Just a random bloke falling in love with a time traveler. We get to see the perspective of the love interest in a story where the main character goes back in time to fix his mistakes. Well, HER mistakes. Since the love interest here is the main character, and the heroine is the one doing 4th-dimensional shenanigans.It probably won't be selected. But hot damn if it is.
This is early to review but here I am. The novel has similar vibes to Pocket hunting dimension but story line is very different. The mystery to the dimension where MC goes isn't solved yet. The general outline is MC one fine day finds himself in a new world after his "death". MC feels he transmigrated. He has a system which helps MC to get stronger. During one of the missions MC dies and he finds himself back in his real world. He now thinks that everything might be a dream but isn't able to convince himself. When he goes to sleep(iirc) he again finds himself in this new world where he levels up. Behind the scenes MC is a young master of a very very powerful god clan I guess. Gears of fate and destiny are into play. MC was one of the most OP characters in past and although he successfully reincarnated he does not have his old memories yet. His mother father and retainers after confirming that MC is back again are gonna start a war, a war on the universe level I guess. So I have hopes that if author can continue this story it is gonna be a super bad ass action in future. Till now MC isn't OP. Just a normal level up thing going on and recently he received his bloodline or class I guess. Keep writing author.
I enjoyed my timing reading the story.So far, it got me hooked and pining for more chapters.The story-telling is great! It has a lot of potential as well to be great. The weaving of emotions for each scene was impressive.Please give this story a chance! 5/5
the novel is very entertaining right from the beginning with its comedic style as well as it's plotline. it's a good read for a day off when just wanting to relax. Good work!???