This story has SO much potential. Especially as a hârem with a great plot to support it, really a rare gem where härem is enjoyable for any female readers out there too. It’s worth the read since there’s no NTR, no r/, and everything is based on mutual feelings, trust, & respect rather than having a “collection”. None of the women in the härem feel like the “same type” or written horribly for the sake of satisfying the desire for smût (main reasons why I hate hârem stories). There’s variety in appearance, personalities, and in the way they support MC. They have opinions and try to resolve things as partners rather than “obeying” to whatever MC wants with no voice of their own. This feels more realistic when it comes to relationships.
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Writing Quality - The writing quality has definitely improved since Nanakawaichan began her writing journey with DLS then TIS. Since English isn’t her first language, there are still amateur mistakes here and there that makes the reading a bit awkward. Nothing that can’t be overlooked at times. I’m very impressed and very happy to see her put so much effort into her writing because I absolutely love her works. She has improved with the story pacing (in TIS, the pacing was a bit fast so the romantic development between MC and his härem didn’t feel 100% genuine). Meanwhile in SSS, there’s ample time for the love interests to develop feelings for the MC. Good job on that!
Story Development - This is her writing’s strongest point. Even if her writing style is lacking in some areas, her story development more than makes up for it in my honest opinion. The suspense, mystery, anticipation, excitement, everything lights a spark and Nana-chan uses it so perfectly that it’s terrifying. I keep coming back for more since it’s so original and leaves a long lasting impression. I went a long while without reading her works and I can still remember important things as if I read it yesterday. To my taste, I wish the pacing could be a bit better, but that’s just a minor thing. Nana-chan has me hooked! Keep it up ♥️
Character Design - Character design is another strength of Nana-chan! Their personalities really come through with the dialogue which isn’t always easy to do. We get insight on their thoughts & feelings when we need the insight. The only complaint (again, just my preference) is that we don’t get background on the characters like we did in TIS and TDKHS. We do have snippets on Julia. But then there’s none on the characters surrounding the MC. I’m sure other people don’t care, especially if it doesn’t serve any purpose to the plot itself. But I like connecting/to comprehend characters at a deeper level. The reason for being who/what they are. Other than that, everything is really good! None of the characters feel one dimensional/hallow/just there to be there.
World Background - Let me say this, Nana-chan’s imagination & creativity when it comes to world building is AMAZING. It’s one of the main reasons why this story has TREMENDOUS potential with the proper guidance. There’s so much to explore and so much we have to know, it’s exciting to think what else will be introduced in the story. I hope Nana-chan gains more recognition and continues to share her great stories here. I’m here to read them all ♥️♥️♥️♥️
Such a shame, the book started out as having great potential and the world building and character development was good, everything was great apart from the cardboard cutout stereotypes that were the characters and the fact that the MC never really fought until it got really annoying for the readers, and then the author just stopped updating. I looked at his profile and I think the last time he was on the website was like a month ago or something? What a waste of potential and such a big cliffhanger.
Very good novel so far( chapter64), this novel is the refreshing type of novel where the mc isn't too op,too stupid and don't abandon everyone for the sake of power.What's the point of being strong but alone?
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It's only a few chapters but a really good read, I like your characters and the concept of your story, this story has a lot of potential, i will keep reading. Good luck author.
the writing quality is awesome i would rate the chapters 5 out of 5 but wished they were a bit longer, though they leave you with a lingering sense of horror.
Hello, everyone, it's the author here to drop an appreciation review after reaching 300 chapters, the novel didn't start out well but I'm doing my best to tie up all loose ends and I hope you guys are seeing it get better, a big thank you to everyone for all your support, that's the main thing that keeps me going.
The only bad thing I have to say about his novels is that I’ve caught up to the current updates and can’t read more :( the author did a great job with the character, the world background and the set up for down the road. Some authors talk about the higher powers or gods but 600 chpts in you still haven’t seen anything that hey talked about earlier. This author has not done that, everything that’s way stronger than the MC is vague and uncertain and that something I really like :) keep up the great work! I’m looking forward to many more chapters :)
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I'm SO glad I stumbled upon this gem...this is just the kind of book I was hoping to find...thank you author for writing this :) You are nailing the villain POV.
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There are a couple of things that don't make sense... the mc shouldn't be that fat...He bikes to university every day and because he is at university he wouldn't spend anything on takeouts or tons of junk food to save money. It was also mentioned he didn't spend money like water and always saved what he earned. Boosting the fact that this makes little sense...To me, it just feels like you made him like that as a joke to try and make it funny. Leading to this being extremely forced...I'm not trying to hate, I'm just stating the fact that it just doesn't make sense giving the background you bought him upon. I also feel like him being a "chubby" elf is going to be a reoccurring joke throughout until he slims down from the training.For me, this is just going to annoy tf outta me as I will always think back to this and how it was forced anyway leading to all mentions of it just annoying me more each time. If that makes sense?I hope this doesn't happen constantly with the forced try at humour as it would be extremely disappointing. If you want humour it will flow naturally in the story. There is no need to force it as it will just bring down the story as a whole. Oh, another thing is his chosen name. Like wtf? Who cares what it means in Chinese? He is an elf... chose an elf name. His own name Eldrian? Is more fcking elfy than Haru... If he was a human I wouldn't mind him having the name Haru but he is not. He is an elf... It's like the mc is a dragon and calling it Haru. It doesn't fit at all. The immersive feel of the book is again compromised by doing this. I am assuming the Author is chinses? Again this is not hate so don't take it as that. It's just you are writing about an elf so why give it a human name? That sort of thing. So far it isn't looking like a great book but I haven't read a lot yet. I will read further and change the review depending on how it reads later.