Enjoyed reading it. Not the serious type of novel but quite enjoyable. I don't usually post reviews since i dont know how, i just did this to support the author. Anyway thank you and good luck. I like the names though????
it was just so retarted the mistakes, and why the **** does fat = bullying? ive been fat all my life, never once been bullied, like what the ****, and ugly doesnt = abused, like are you retarted or what, and what is with the main character not checking anything?
Honestly this novel not bad. Just dont apply too much logic while read. Some plot not exaggerated also not very too little (idk how to explain). If mc increasing his strength just take it pinch of salt dont think too much why that can happen and how it work.. Pretty fun to read for 40s chaps.Overall novel not so great just like other readers say. But for story i feel its ok to read.Ps : author too much when mc grandchild involve. Always to girl side.. Somehow i feel uncomfortable.. Lol
MC is incredibly dense and the system seems to have disappeared.he looks down on the cultivators then gets scared by every old man he meets thinking they are an expert
Woah.. that was so good.. damn good.. like that's amazing from the start till the end I was so immersed in the story.. I love it.. everything is on point.. Waiting for more..
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
I actually love this book everything about it is great except the translation quality which became poor after some time
Mc doesn't act like an ancestor at all.. He gets flustered so easily by girls, absolute simp ??
Does anyone know of a Chinese version? I can't find it! ??
Overall, I love how the author had written the story with smooth writing. Hats off to the author for that. The story is well paced... tho I think the world background s lacking a little but it is my personal opinion.I like the concept of the story so highly recommended.
Came back to give it another try and it is still as bad as I remember with sun par writing. The racism and nationalism of China better then everyone. The insanity of what is basically a story about a reincarnator reincarnating to a world where they get to reincarnate to maybe get abilities so they can go back and reincarnate again and again
Simply stated, this an average novel among Webnovel standards. 2-D characters that aren’t fleshed out, so they feel like the generic MC’s and secondary characters all over this website.The plot in this story started fairly simple and easy to grasp, a reincarnated second chance to reach the top and beyond. What started as a VR story became a mixture of Gods and the supernatural, which could’ve been great if it wasn’t for one thing... VR. Just like Shura’s Wrath, an older novel that tried to merge the VR world and real world. Like it’s predecessor, this one failed so far.Not to insult the authors ability but every character you’ve read about in any other VR novel, is literally the same except the change in names and locations. To the MC’s love interest whose beauty is ‘absurdly-breathtaking-she-hides-her-beauty. Even the MC and Gods can’t resist.’ The MC himself is no different, following the ‘cold-hearted and emotional’ trope. This novel could have better potential but the author tries to make things edgy and emo, making the novel a cringe-read. I assume because the author is probably a first-timer and a teenager (which turns out to be false, since they’re a law student.) Instead of using VR, the author should’ve opted to based the story in the real word with fantasy elements or- in the future where VR was so transcendent, it literally was a second life rather than just a ‘game’. This would’ve meshed the story better in my humble opinion. Instead we have immersion breaking elements such as status bars and other rpg-elements that’s redundant throughout chapters. Which will only further destroy the immersion for the reader since the author introduced the concept of different ‘universes’ based on a theme (wuxia, steampunk, western...). The novel is decent for a speed-read or when bored. If the author would further refine and better mix the world of reality and VR, this story could leap. Unfortunately the combo of stale characters and storytelling sells it short.