Divine Locket

spoilerAlthough, the MC suppose to be the Tsar, and hold so much power. somehow a terrorist group was able to cause so much chaos for him despite the story showing that he already root most of them out once. they even manage to re-engineer his tv into a bomb, an able to replace them with the original in mass quantity. and worse of all, lot of them are in the hand of foreign leader. It feel way too force to have happen. first of all, where did all the people available to put large amount of bomb into his TV?second, how did they get their hand on the TV?third, where did they get so many explosive?forth, how did the item given to important leader be a like other commercial product? those item should have been gift from the tsar which mean it one of the first few that are hand deliver by the loyal guard so it make no sense. it only make sense for minor noble that would be buying from commercial TV.the plot for this was too abrupt as there was not even a single sign of the terrorist group doing any activity, which should be notice as gathering explosive should definitely be notice.and author trying to make this into a misunderstanding which make no sense because if the MC trying to attack other country, why would that make any sense in the strategic way? is making more enemy really a strategy?This is a very stupid plot which just make no sense, and just make the reader want to quit reading.

Overall, I love how the author had written the story with smooth writing. Hats off to the author for that. The story is well paced... tho I think the world background  s lacking a little but it is my personal opinion.I like the concept of the story so highly recommended.

What can I say this is getting a 5 stars from me as it is my favourite type of genre and has a lot of my favourite aspects to read in a novel, you have me hooked to see where this novel leads I will be here for the long run keep them coming Amanasci

soooooo many thing happening when i think that i got it something new happen its great novel i like reading it  hope you finch the novel the mc jest got his 15 birthday he got poison and cant move  some monster attack from some portal  jest as people start to panic another portal opens the mc halo save him but  a monster that can destroy the country jest pop up one more thing the mc sent to his mined*brain and his emotion have personalty and can control him   one more thing  they are strong as gods more thing happen that happen

It’s going well right now and definitely has a lot of potential. Although I am surprised this  gem isn’t getting the attention is should have which is such a shame since this deserves a lot more readers

the auther tries his best to make it every thing ground breaking. right from the start.he doesn't has experience.I good story plot. but it is ruined by how impatient the auther was. moreover you are really in a hurry ..the starting is messed. it destroys the taste of the reader.rewrite that. if you want to ensure that people open their wallet for you.