"Yes, you can call me Jun Lan!"
As time passed on, he became a thorn in the side of every nation besides the nation of Hua.
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Uninspired and the systematical abuse of the english language doesn't make it any more readable. MC doesn't reincarnate as much as gets perma-logged into a goblin body. Attempts at explaining the game world makes it just more confusing as dimensions are not the authors strong suit. Stats are there just for the number to go up and seem to be arbitrarily infinite or completely gone depending on the situation, no feel whatsoever for any aspect of reality in this novel
Somewhat good story but utterly atrocious and unreadable grammar and spelling
This a really unique and well made novel.
good story.. characters are very expressive FL is very intelligent
i love this novel i am always here reading when a new chapter come out dkxkckcndndnddndnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxnxxjdjdjfjjvjvvjbjvbbbbhhgfjfjfjfj
Really good novel, keep it up
Excellent story worth a shot.Complete english sentences with paragraphes, good writing style and rare typos. For an ukrainian who might not even be a native english speaker, it’s quite an achievment. The first chapters have more descriptions and inner monologues because it’s a dungeon story, but it soon switch to a better balance with actions and dialogues.Good world building, and great attention from the author to build a consistant magic system bringing enougth originality to stand out compared to generic magic fantasy stories. It’s called ”The origin of dungeons” and explores how such a world came to be.It’s therefor a bit weird how there are some inconsistancies or even contradictions between the actions and the established personality of the MC. It tickles me a bit, but you guys will probably overlook it just fine. I do warn the author that a too apathic MC that turns into just a camera for the readers makes for a boring story tho. An MC needs motivations, drive and agency, else the author will have to cheat too much and pile up the plot armor and coincidencies to push the story forward, turning the MC into a raft without sail pushed and dragged around by the tempest.Overall a great start and i recommend you give it a try.
Hey guys its me the author here and i will tell you a few things for my story : First of all i will do my very best to be at the too even though that will never happen . Second of all im your friend . Third of all everything that it is currently In the story is all improvisation Its all of the top of my head so im just as confused as you guys . Fourth all If theres a plot hole then we all fall in it togehter and we all jump down intot he endless abyss . FiFTh where all in this together you know yeah you get it we are all in this together so if something weird happens i have no idea whats going .On and you dont to . Some might call it having an inferiority Complex but I call it me just being a total piece of human trash and worse then all others . but seriously If i Mess up with something i will blame myself for what happend cause if my friends or somethhing start blaming me For stuff . which isnt called friendship thats claled something else ill just kinda accept it and apologize . Is that what being called a pushover is for well i dont exactly Know Right guys i have totally Never cried myself to Sleep for something i didn’t. Do or because my mother hit me right before i went to sleep . And i thought she was very intimidating along with my teacher who i Think is very annoying . No im not crying your crying
I just wrote this review to warn people about his girlfriend corpse got raped. although author said there is no netorare. but I don't want give bad rating for this point.