too cool mam too cool best primordial book......hats off to you the great author of this magnificent book.....your suck shall thrive on...you have my heartfelt blessings
Giving an average grade since the plot and character's feel like a replica of every genderbend fantasy novel. The meek fem mc and the aggressive love interests... I'm open to different smut novels but I've never been fond of beta mcs.
One of the more darker novel Ive read but I absolutely love the characters in this. I cant wait to see its developments!
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both the title and the synopsis have nothing to do with the story, I think they put the wrong story in by mistake.both the title and the synopsis have nothing to do with the story, I think they put the wrong story in by mistake.
Writing quality one star: Seems like after the first couple chapters the translation turns absolutely abysmal. Every line is separated and the grammar is horrible. Worse than standard mtl.
Story Development 5 stars: The story is unique and neat. Everyone develops a small world than battles with them to develop them. The premise is exciting.
Character Design 4 star: Real people don't really matter and the focus is less on physical qualities and more on mental competence. The beast designs are nice though.
Updates 5 star: Translation is bad enough that they can probably get a hundred chapters out a day.
World Background 2 star: I read over 60 chapters and the mc's civilation is never really explained. How powerful are they? What's up with Qi and all that? How hood is technology?
Fix the translation and story instantly turns to a 4.2 Star
The plot is interesting and somewhat unique. It borrows from tried and true popular themes and stories but adds its own spin to it.Initially, I had this novel reviewed at about 3.5 stars, but with the author's revision of their chapters making it a much more enjoyable story to read, I've changed my review as I said I would.I hope to see more good things for this author in the future!
Quite an enjoyable read, this novel is. I enjoy this type of theme, the critical return. It has been used in other novels, however I find each story, maybe similar, it delivers it’s own individuality for the reader to enjoy.So far only 20 trial chapters but I find myself wanting more to read. Hopefully it will be selected and be available for us to enjoy.
A good story that is ultimately weighed down by two big issues. Firstly, there is such a thing as too much detail. There were many times in the story I was reading when too many small things were talked about. Like going to one place only to be turned away because he needs *blank*. So he goes to get *blank* only for it to be a long drawn-out process. This happens a lot, and I keep asking myself: "Did you really need to take time to include all these useless things?" It really feels like the word count is unnecessarily padded. The other issue is the MC knows LITERALLY nothing. Imagine a little kid following you around asking the most obvious questions for several hours. And no matter how much they learn, even the slightest hint of anything new leads to a barrage of new questions. I'm surprised the MC knows how to BREATHE without being told how to do it.
I just read the description of such a work and they coincide by 90-95% !! (only there are animals instead of plants). I won’t be surprised at the similar content! (I won’t read it)).
One of the most satisfying and fast-paced books I’ve ever read. Everyone progresses very quickly but not in a way that feels forced or wrong. The world building is pretty good. It’s one of the very few books to pull off a universe-level scale setting well. It’s not perfect but it’s more than good enough. The power system is incredibly fun and mc’s plot armor is explained by it(which imo is a great way to give an mc plot armor)Thank you Author for all you hard work
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