It's an okay series but there's too much nonsense and idle background scenes where it just gets boring after a while. It has the potential to be good but it lacks something. It also didn't focus on the main characters much as the MC was too busy making girls cute or pretty instead of going in with the main story. Ending was quite okay, it could've been better though. Translation is perfect though. That's one thing I really really liked!
Will there be any more chapters?? waiting for over 9 months by now.....
In all and in all, if you have patience this isn't a bad novel it's cool but here's a couple of things you gotta look out for;1. Over exaggeration There's so much exaggerating in this novel that it's sometimes hard to read, you'll see stuff like; "his opponent was powerful and wielded the powers of the scorching sun, but how could he with stand the powers of the flower burial sword," or something like "the golden dragon might be strong but the heavenly dragon is the lord of all dragons." if you can get past corny lines like these you're good to go.2. There are too many dragonsLike seriously prepare for this one. when you read other novels like King of gods or ye Qinyu's immortality emperor, dragons there are like OG sacred strong and fierce creatures but here nope! you'll see, purple dragon, white dragon, azure dragon, golden dragon, blue dragon, power rangers Dino thunder(just kidding with this part
This novel is really interesting ,I love the way Williams cares for flora ,and the way flora handles the situations. You should try and read it ,you will really love it ❣️❣️❣️❣️
I really like this
Author can you explain the relation of your novels to each other or no relation whatsoever?
heeee author-san this power stone is definitely not a bribe for more chapters but still don't tell anyone okay if not then????? goodbye ?
The writing is good, grammar is to the point and story progress fascinatingly. The mystery element around which the story revolves is to the point, and it will make you seek the answers more and more with each passing chapter.
First off this is going to be a complaint or just hating I guess so don’t really expect Constructive Criticism..Now that’s out of the way 1 reason on why I don’t like this FF would be how MC just interact with the SCP Verse. He was literally so emotional in the 1 chapter for family but the moment he knows that he is in the SCP verse he suddenly forgets them and then literally has the biggest hero complex ever to just save the tragic SCP that were kill/abandoned/forgetten by the Foundation when he literally says that he knows more than the Foundation so he should at the bare minimum think of the perspective the foundation do to these SCP.2 Reason he knows that these are fictional character but idk if I understand what Author is trying to say but he thinks he can’t essentially be killed since he is from the “real world” where as the SCP is just fictional.Final reason MC to support the Hero complex is the fact that he automatically and I mean automatically make it sounds like the foundation is the Big Evil Villain of the story while he is the Hero?I‘ll just be giving this 3 since No story so far in my experience can make me give a 1 other than GhostyZ himself but thats another story
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