This is such a fun read!! ?? So…. will it still continue?? If not, where else can I find this??
The beginning of the story resembles a kids writing, world background doesn't really make sense, the usual cliche antagonists who are sick in the head or suffered severe trauma. Redundant sentences for word count etc. Still an ok read if u can skim through it and ignore the grammar as it's not the author first languge. There is a gradual increase in quality of writing if you continue long enough.Read when you have nothing else
I read only one chapter only to realize how garbage and unreadable this story is. It starts off seemingly from nowhere, or if it does specify, the grammatical mistakes makes it impossible to understand. There’s no real dialogue separations and sentences are incredibly short which makes it harder to read. I understand if it’s a new writer but cmon, reread and proof read it before you post it. This is hard to read, period. Hopefully you read this comment and learn how you can improve your writing.Sentence/Structure : 0 ; invalid, no structureStory : 0 ; invalid, story is barely readable with only few plot elements present.Grammar : -5 ; the author seems as if he/she didn’t try at all.Presentation : -10 ; the presentation is awful and characters are seemingly randomly thrown in making the already difficult to read story, more difficult to understand. Overall : -3/10This story and writing in general is fucking trash, no I’m not kidding, don’t read this ****. Please, don’t. The author needs to improve on presentation, grammar, structure and plot before he could ever receive any good comments.
Made me spend money after using this app for 6 years
The novel is very good,hope the mc will fck that harem king and hehehe we await more ladies inside the harem and get more sh*tty skills hahahahhah
Errr really ? Do you have to be so immersived to play a fvcking PUBG? Its not even VR game lol , the author makes a "Try Hard" MC to be a godlike player LMAODude if you want to watch good PUBG player just watch shroud lol This novel nothing but trash thats it
I am loving this novel so far. The writing quality is excellent and the story flows nicely. Although I have seen the “VR game in another world” type of novel before, this is by far the most unique and interesting. I am also enjoying how the MC is so OP but remains low key. I Can’t wait to se where this novel goes!
very good read and fast translation. fast character progression. very good story. Dont hestitate to start reading this book. You will really enjoy it.
Translator of this work heavily relies on MTL. The chapter orders are messed up. It's go back and forth. the same rank are also differently translated. I hope the translator do his work probably.
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The overall plot is good but the chapters should be free as Web novel is charging coins for reading chapters considering the poor English translation and overall poor quality of the translation
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