Great book! Love the beginning and the book itself. this is my first time reading an eastern fantasy book and it's amazing! keep it going author! You are doing a great job!
I have read all the way up to chap 36 so far. I am having a hard time finishing the book.The morgiana girl seems to be shaping up to be the love interest so far. It does seem way too early to commit to someone unless the character will grow later and be with someone else but I doubt it with the way the author is writing him up. For a thirty year old person he does act like a kid (even the excuse of staying in character is a little bit exxagerated). One of the main reason people read reincarnation/rebirth novels is to have an MC that acts maturely and does not get flustered when he see a beautiful woman everytime...like seriously there was Victoria's Secret models on earth, why is he getting shocked all the time.As for character design it is very vague, I don't know if the author doesn't know how to write character description or just women's description. But they are all beautiful and the only thing I know is their beauty ranking. Honestly if you have a hard time writing description, as the MC is from earth you can use famous people to describe them to help us picture them.Another weird thing, that huang jin or yin guy asked morgiana to be his concubine but his wife refused to give herself to another man (why the double standard? Is the wife ok for him taking multiple women ...is a woman recognized as the top beauty in a city, a genius cultivator OK with sharing her man? Unless there is some type of abuse going on either mental or physical I really don't see something like that going on. Even more in a world where power is everything, no matter how much power the man is, the more established a woman is the less she can compromise.There is a reason why rich men statistically don't marry rich, powerful, independent women. There is usually a disconnect. "power couples" is usually in the realm of fantasy, there is always a give and take in relationship even in so called power couple in real life.I will try to read more chapters and update later my review if I see some improvements as usually people get better as they write.It seems it is not a harem novel from an author comment I read. Which is pretty good. But just because it is not harem story doesn't mean author you should scare away from exploring relationship and growth. People change, and someone you liked at 15 may not be the right person at 40 or 30 when you know yourself more or just life happens. I mean the high divorce rate nowadays that divorce is no longer taboo is a good proof of that.So far the most fun and interesting love interest I have in asian novels here is the one from Swallowed star where the girl was obese and the MC still fell in love with her ( yes she lost weight but that was after the MC reciprocated her feelings).
Though i write this novel when there is only three chapter and there is a long way to go. i must says that i found the concept of the story to be interesting and the use of language here is immersive and pretty. But i do find some problem in certain scene where there are multiple unnamed Character in the scene and it is hard to keep track of who is doing what. aside from that everything is great. I'm going to put this in my library and I'm looking forward to see new chapter as I'm now curious about what's going to happen next.
All hail for some news. Even though it is not all my toys this is good enouph as long as their is no ntr to the mc. That is my only one wish for this as I have been given good work on the AMT. Hope you get some inspiration.
typical Chinese face slaping novel that never gets to the point and is mostly about how people are not believing in the mc abilities even though he has slapt them in the face multiple times
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This is great! I would totally recommend it! Unfortunately, I wasn't able to read past the locked chapters, but still, great story!:))))))
anyway we can get an actual translation? This excuse of an MTL edited translation is a disgrace to a novel of this calibre, can u pls not ruin stuff webnovel??
this novel is interesting i liked it, i hope that in this novel there is no romance. KAKAKAKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKAKKAKAKAKKAKA
One of the best erotic action adventure stories I've read. The characters are well fleshed out, the world building is in depth without be to over blown, and the smutty goodness is very descriptive. Keep up the good work.[img=recommend]