If only the grammar were fixed re edit it please
A great story. I like the idea, the characters, the plot and well, the whole novel in general!The story covers an interesting alternative reality which has amasing vr technology in which the story is set in a sandbox survival game. The MC uses their knowledge to build, thrive and succeed.I won't give anymore spoilers but I will say that it is at a turning point where it could go in many different ways (once the author returns). I look forward to seeing where the story goes, whether to space, deeper into simulation or maybe someplace I can't fathom.I have looked high and low across the internet and can't find anything quite like it. I truly recommend that anyone who enjoys reading give it a try, you may be surprised.I will gladly continue to wait for the author to return, even if it takes another 15 months.Thanks for taking the time to read my review, I hope you will/have read this and love it as much as I do.
So far so good. The world building and storyline seem to be progressing well with little to no grammatical errors — But I’d hate to be the MC, lol. That guy be down for a whole new world of pain.
So, for starters... Interesting. The novel is actually incredibly well done. Although there are the usual misgendering and misspelling at times, the overall premise and story telling is actually quite good. (The 1 star comments are bots who trash every novel on the website- ignore them) So far (ch.20) the progression is quite well done. The only issue I have with it is the whole synopsis, (choice A or B or C, all of them) which hasn't really played out at all and considering the character's personality it's unlikely to happen. The world building is fairly well done though there isn't much of it. Then again this is SO FAR, I have no idea what's to come but my interest has been piqued with this one. (The people complaining about the character being dense and unaware of how strong he actually is, are idiots.. he had no actual skills to test his strength nor does he know anything about the world level, as far as he's concert his journey just began.) it's only a 4.0 for now as it's still in trial and the way it goes from here will determine what I actually rate it. (Don't worry I never give 5.0 ratings)
I’ve read about 50 chapters and while the novel starts off good and is interesting the translation and editing go downhill really fast to the point I think reading from a mtl site is just as good
This novel is really good, the story is captivating right from the start. the Main character has a good background and not your typical past that MC was abandoned by his parents or is an orphan because his parents died in a car accident, the writing quality has a few grammatical mistakes, but of course, considering the author is new it's no problem. the story binds you from the first chapter only. I am really excited about him getting strong and taking revenge on those mother fu**ers in the future .Am definitely waiting for more chapters.
Hello, Author here,This review is after 31 chapters. I've made quite a few mistakes and I know that and first few chapters aren't interesting as this is my first time writing a novel. but as the story progresses it is becoming quite a good novel to read, at least this is what I think.As for what your guys who are regular readers of my novel think, Please give your review and rate it so that your fellow readers and I can know what you think about it.As for the new readers, please give it a try and leave your review.
what happened to this novel .
This is my favorite work on Webnovel by far. I've always loved Kingdom Building type novels, as well as ones dedicated to crafting, but this story is the only one to Beyond satisfy those wishes as well as maintain my emotional investment in the story.I'm not amazing with reviews, so I won't further explain my love for this. Although, if anyone is looking to read this, I ensure this story is what you seek.
I am the author, of course; I will rate my novel five stars, but seriously it is good,Do read and write a review.
This is a hidden gem especially if you like darker novels, the mc is somewhat op but he still runs into problems a lot. I like how the author handled him existing for so long by making him just box everything away. His morals are non existent after spending so long in torturous pain but I would like there to be moments where he questions what he’ s, maybe if he commits mass murder for little to no reason. My suggestion for the author to increase readers is to change the synopsis, its really long and to be honest I only read through like half or less, it doesn’t tell you what the story is about at all. If you wish to keep the poems In it I would suggest putting them beneath a reagular synopsis, when I first saw this novel I was going to not read it because of the synopsis but I’m I gave it a chance.
why would you recommend me #harem trash......................................................................................................