This book needs more creativity, but for your time and effort and ideas put into this, I'll give it a 3 star rating. Also, the update stability is very good and constant.My reason;Almost every event is repetitive. He meets a friend or old colleague, they get a call, he follows them to said locations, he finds out they are in a tough situation, and he bails them out.It's the same everytime, nothing new. Also, in terms of female characters, it would be more interesting if the story was centred around a female rather than many that don't add to the story or give very little.For example, the first lady he met, though, she had a bad personality but it fits real life situations when a lady is looking for one who can help her financially. Honestly, if you worked around her, including her into the story more, things will be more interesting. She doesnt have to be his main love interest, maybe except she change. But story is a gradual process.The high school friend he met, the one he did a grand birthday for, she is so boring. Their interactions doesnt add anything to the story.That's why I said rather than centralising the story around multiple females, choosing one or a few would be much better. It needs proper structuring and this would probably ' truly' become a 4 star novel or higher.That's just an idea, not an absolute, I'm just saying. It doesnt have to be the way I said it. You are the author, and your decision is always wahats best for your story, but let there be a target, proper structure and so on. Thanks for the story, I'll keep reading ?
