this plot is really amazing, I'm in love with this plot as well as so much excited to read further chapter❤❤❤ all the best author I'm waiting for more updates???
For those who can't read after 11 chapter, don't worry u didn't lose anything, this novel only known something like this:until mc is reunited with those sisters all of them are powerful, after that all are small women's and mc have to fight gangsters, aliens etc. to protect them: every chapter is full of drinking, fighting and stupid cliches.
This is my first time writing a review for a book and I can say that this has a lot of potential.It has been a while since I read about a non-dumb mc and this gives me a different feeling compared to the other VRMMORPG novels and it gives a fresh feeling.Continue the good work author.
I love this book, the writing is beautiful, the character discriptions are beautiful. The only complaint is about Mo Ran. He raped his shizun and mistreated him in every way in his past life. according to my morals, that is unacceptable. Other than that, beautiful work
Its a defferent kind of world l must say... A Cool one.....Really liked the character development and the story is also nice and fresh....Also l liked the ML most?.... He is totally my type?...All the best author... Keep writting this cool story.... Really hooked me up...
Hi! Hi!Wow, what an exciting story, curious about every chapter. ..why only 6 chapters? I really love it, please update the next chapter quickly?
5 chapters in! Time for a review!This story's got quite an interesting start and it helped making the readers anticipate what could be coming next Instead of starting of with world introduction or setting introduction, you got to the action right away which is clever!I also like how you slowly introduce the characters and stuff after that It's quite refreshing for this genre! Still, the story could use some more researchs on Japanese cultures and naming, so that it sounds more convincing, now that the cast still feel a bit Western and could confuse some readers.btw keep up the good work, author! You're doing great! ???
So far, the novel is interesting. I was like let me just read one or two chapters to know what it is about but I ended up reading alot. Kudos to the author for writing an amazing work. good job
Hypnosis stories are always welcome here. I hope that you will keep on writing chapters. Mind control is very rare in here so I am very delighted to see a novel like this.
hehe, Nice story Update soon ???????Even through I was too lazy to read At 1st then after reading some parts I decided to read all the chapter???......
A genuinely wonderful storyline with a great character design ?????????????????????????????????????I look forward to the new chapters ?
I'm going to go all 3 star except for Character designSaw this and I'm quite tired of this genre myself but decided to read it cuz most of them have atleast great comedy.I'm dropping it but go ahead for those who want to read it, it's still decent atleast