Excellent if there’s no cringey romance. Sadly there is.
At this point almost every chapter has a face slapping scenario, like the very generic face slapping at a school reunion for example...
I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more.May this book's popularity rise in the future! The conversation needs work if you want people to be more interested in the story's potential, thrilling action, and enigmatic character. I really enjoy how straightforward the author is in this book, and after reading the first two chapters, I found myself wanting to read more.May this book's popularity rise in the future!
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I can clearly see the author devotion in the book. It's extremely interesting and captivating. I give it full points because I see the high potential in it.
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Not a Samurai, Not even close. Random 5 Stars that are undeserved.Failure of a Story due to author lack of understanding of what a "Samurai" is.
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And Also this story is really great story, that I've read just a view chapter, but soon I will read all of them. . I love how the author give a message to reader, that really amazing ???????
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Excellent Work. The synopsis, the characters, the writing quality, and the story development... great. There are not many chapters but these chapters are more than enough to show the story potential. And it has great potential, especially in the author's hand.You're doing an excellent job, keep it up.
First time I've ever seen a novel use good culture for powerful moves. I love the piano and the harmonica is a plus don't know enough about the harmonica I'm open to the idea.