The universe Karma and Fortune started to flow into him, he did nothing to protect himself. Even he, a Dao God will die if he just stay like this.
In that instant, her mind went blank and she gasped for air, her arms forced down.
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Very good work I encourage the author
Everyone in their reviews are giving good commments, So i decided to give good one also, , First chapter is good, didn't read rest yet, but keep up, Very good job?
Reviewing at around chapter 275:I have conflicted feeling about this.the beginning was not too good in my opinion because the author went the extra mile with the drawbacks on the mc, imposing 4~5 handicaps.Then it turned out to be great with many things addressed and an excellent pace until around the mid hundred chapters, I was surprised by how good this turned out to be and was enjoying the story A LOT. afterwards I feel like it went downhill after the tournament arc. it's moving at a snail pace where there was no progress with the mc character for a hundred chapters (think about it, mc moved from lvl 0 to lvl 42 in less than 200 chapters then suddenly you have to grind a hundred chapters, one third of the story, where the mc lvl stagnates. To me that's killing the story with bad pace and not enjoyable one bit).Now to be fair, the story is about "kingdom building" since the title is about the base he is growing, so I would not complain that a lot of story time is spent on growing his forces, but the contrast in the pacing was too obvious. spending hundreds of chapters in events that take few months of story time is a mistake to me, especially when those events are not Central to plot AND the story is in early stages.I will probably come back to this afterwards but I am dreading the grind if the plot slows down as much as it did between lvl 42 to lvl 43.
I am pretty much amazed as to how this novel is crafted. The FL is quiet and not presumptuous. Even if she was a top assassin in her previous life, she still acts her age and doesn't underestimate other people just because she has more experience. She is the quiet one beside her temperamental brother but her performance is outstanding. She is super low key. I am just a little down that I am already up to date and is itching to know more. Ahhh.. I just hope that there would be more updates.
So far this novel is a very interesting and good story to read. The first person perspective is very refreshing, and the way the author tells the story through the main characters eyes is amazing.
I get hooked reading the first chapter, the author does a great job of portraying the mc as a charismatic character. World background? hum. Kinda irked me how the universal empires only consisted of about 1500 planets, like I mean wouldn't that be more of a galactic scale? Maybe I'm just overthinking it, maybe the term 'universal' describes how massive the civilization is, either way, can't wait to see how everything unravels.
Interesting so far. I have only read the first few chapters, but what should I say? I am hooked. The character design is good. The setting is cool. Great work. Highly recommended.
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Firstly, I was attracted by Cover . After reading it I am satisfied 'Cause I took a good decision. Really excited to read more chapter . The story plot line is the mirror of how much good writer of this novel. Need to read this story more .love ya.