Writing Quality is great, there are little to no errors, smooth sentences.Stability of Updates is good, I guess. Since it currently only have 3 Chapters, I can't really say.Story Development is really unique, there are some words I couldn't recognize, and the pace is good. Character Design is also good, a bit unique. Their description is also good. World Background is great so no complaints there.
The story is great! It has a lot of potential into it! I think this is going to be awesome in the future! So far, after reading the first few chatpers, I believe this novel is amazign! I commented the things that I think needs editting!I'd like to note that the events felt a bit sudden. It would be fantastic if you could establish the narration first before placing the system. Let' say that the man was weak, like you've said, author. And in that world/village, violence was always the key. Survival of the fittest. Therefore, he needs to do something. It would be better to explain first the situation he was into. Let the thug beat him up. Show the main protagonist he was not meant to wield a gun, but in the end, he was the "top gunner" in the story. In that way, you can make the story more interesting! feel free to disagree, and these are only my suggestions~ Kudos for the author!
Story is okay ...but it could have been better ..there are several loopholes ....and majority of scences seem incomplete.....?? to me.....hope u understand.
It's a fun adventure story, the characters are good and some are ridiculous like Gaffin. I like story with adventure genre like this, cause i like adventure. Good story for adventure and thriller lover.
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I really love these kind of MCs. Yes! Please destroy them all! It's been so long since I felt real anger just by reading a novel. His family are too petty I can't! And the audacity of his girlfriend! By the way, I like the pace of this one keep it up!
An interesting story in an interesting world. I like, that there are some unique and interesting powers. Characters are relatable, especially the dorm senior. Well done author! Added to library and waiting for more!
Another fucking VR game. These aren’t interesting at all if you fill up the app with them and with same plot too. Please stop with this **** and give us something different or something at least good.
It’s average. The dialogue is probably the stories weakest point, as it feels very unnatural and forced.And of course, the story is paid. Is it worth paying for? NoJust go to another website and read from that instead. Webnovel is a greedy company anyways.
It is one of the best funny novel present on this site. Unlike most of the novels here which have no character development even for the main characters, the antagonist here have their own thoughts and direction. The power levelling system is good, it has a fixed limit and will not power up infinitely. This shows that the author has a direction and ending planned for the story and the story will not have endless power up then defeat a new villian arc's. The mc's power is interesting and is not overpowered and the funny part is how he uses the so called useless abilities to turn the tables on his opponents. The mc is relatable and not like other mc whose only character trait is to cultivate and take revenge when someone wrongs them. If there needs to be an overall ranking for the stories then it would be Lord of the mysteries, My House of Horrors and then this- Divine Card Creator.
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